Penname: Dallas5star [Contact]

Real name: Qwen

Member Since: February 17 2014

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 542]
Summary:

How far will you go when you're lonely?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 75
Completed:No
Word count: 151713
Read Count: 143289
Published: March 13 2014
Updated: July 17 2015


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ah Jodi, I was so afraid for her on that cruise ship. So glad Garrett got shipped off. I am conflicted about Steve. He was such an ass to her in the beginning, but then I think he really does care for her, but is just a tool about showing it. For that other creepy joker, I knew it was something else he was doing at Jodie's house. I just need Somebody to beat him down just once please dear God. Jodi I feel this a turn for her, she really does need to get some help. Can't wait to read more. I want to start over at the beginning and begin again.

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed
Date: June 21 2015

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ah Jodi, I was so afraid for her on that cruise ship. So glad Garrett got shipped off. I am conflicted about Steve. He was such an ass to her in the beginning, but then I think he really does care for her, but is just a tool about showing it. For that other creepy joker, I knew it was something else he was doing at Jodie's house. I just need Somebody to beat him down just once please dear God. Jodi I feel this a turn for her, she really does need to get some help. Can't wait to read more. I want to start over at the beginning and begin again.

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed
Date: June 22 2015

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 120]
Summary:

Five years ago, Breezy Collins, left Baton Rouge, Louisiana and vanished without a trace leaving everything and everyone behind in order to save herself from further heartbreak from the only man she has ever loved. Breezy's sister Phoenix is the only person who knows her whereabouts but not her secrets. It's her sister's wedding that brings her back home for a week. She can only hope that she can avoid running into the man that still haunts her dreams and owns her heart.

Jace Bennett, has spent the last five years searching for something that he knows doesn't exist anymore. His Heart. He's colder and more distant. All the things that use to give him joy now only bring him misery because of her but a promise is a promise and he'll uphold his end of it no matter the cost. But when a chance encounter brings him face to face with the one woman who holds the key to his happiness, he'll do everything in his power to ensure that she never leaves him again. By any means necessary, he'll try to convince her to give him Just One More Try.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 19790
Read Count: 43946
Published: May 20 2014
Updated: September 13 2014


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 (continued)

This is good. I want to know what happened, why didn't show drop kick ole girl and what was the real deal w Paul?



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading. Paul, is just a friend. Infact he was her best friend until she left town. But she didn't want him to have to chose sides between her and Jace. Paul is just very protective of her.

Sara is just a bitch of the highest caliber. She wants Jace and she'd determined to make it hard for him move on with his life. Even if she did deceive him.

Sara is Jace's problem to handle for now unless she crosses the line with Breezy. LOL!!

Stick with me. Things are about to get fun. Don't forget we've got a week in town and a wedding to help plan. It should be lots of fun. Stay tuned.

Yevette

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed
Date: July 10 2014

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 165]
Summary:

Banner by: Sienna Gray

 

All Camryn Clifford wanted to do was live out her dream. She had made it out of her dead end town but her old life wanted to pull her back in.

Richard Hammonds wanted Camryn and he would have her. He has skeletons in his closet that he needs to keep from her to win her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 17
Completed:Yes
Word count: 68991
Read Count: 57824
Published: June 20 2014
Updated: May 24 2015


Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Three words, oh my God. This is so good. Can't wait to see where this goes

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed
Date: November 13 2014

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

It's about to go down......

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 23 2014

Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16

This is such a beautiful story. I was hoping it was going to spin off w Nyesha and Donald. I would love to see how he worn her down. Thank you for serving that cake w a smile to that heffa! It was truly the icing on the cake.

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 24 2015

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[Reviews - 573]
Summary:

Zoey Vance woke up in the hospital with no memory of her life before that moment. She doesn't even know her own name. Now she has to try and put the pieces of her life back together with the help of the man who hit her with his car that fateful night. As her memories start to return she wonders if she is better off not knowing who she really is. 

Brian Preston is consumed with guilt, the woman just ran out into the street with no warning. He coudln't avoid hitting her. He feels it is his personal responsibility to care for her until she can care for herself and moves her in with him and his fiance, Macy. As time wears on he starts to wonder if he wants her around to ease his guilt or if there aren't bigger emotions at play.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 33
Completed:Yes
Word count: 77720
Read Count: 103526
Published: July 19 2014
Updated: October 14 2018


Title: Memories Lost

I love this story. I was wondering how the first day of work would turn out. Who are you thinking would be the twins?



Author's Response:

Lance Gross is who I imagine the twins to look like.

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: January 10 2015

Title: Chapter 1: Cast Pictures

oh yes, he is sexy. You should look up Mike Colter as well. He is another hot one.

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed
Date: January 11 2015

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 115]
Summary:

tbk


Camille Jones accepted society's problem with her body long ago. Yet, she can't help the insecurity felt when approached by gym owner Ryan Kahuna, he was most women's wet dream. He could have any woman he wanted. 


Including her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Extreme Language, Fluff, Kink, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 11368
Read Count: 16319
Published: July 30 2014
Updated: August 28 2014


Title: Chapter 4: Parking Lot Pimpin

I like this story, can't wait to see where it goes.

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed
Date: August 12 2014

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 857]
Summary:

 Camille Jackson was rejected since birth over her dark skin complexion. She has grown a tough skin and doesn’t get attached to anyone because of how some people have viewed her without even getting to know her. However Camille opens her heart to a baby in need and for the first six months Camille has grown to love the baby as if she were her own. That is until the baby's biological father comes into the picture.

Hiram Whitfield Jr was brought up in one of the most well known Ku Klux Klan families in the south and as the only son he feels the pressure to carry on his family's tradition. After finishing his prison sentence all Hiram wants to do is change his life for the better and be a good father to his child. If that means being disowned by his bigoted family then so be it. Ironically enough Hiram would have never thought that Camille would be the one to be his rock and strength to do so.

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Inspirational
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters
Series: None
Chapters: 51
Completed:Yes
Word count: 107887
Read Count: 215324
Published: October 09 2014
Updated: October 25 2015


Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 30

Aww, this makes me so sad. I know there are a lot of parents that punish their kids if the play w kids outside of their race. I just want to hug Steven. Then go and beat the s$&@ out of the parents.

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed
Date: January 14 2015

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 7

Ah, I like this story. Curious to see how it will unfold.

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed
Date: October 18 2014

Title: COLORLESS

Take your time and develop the story you want to tell. I can relate to a lot of themes in this story. I am from the south and this stuff still happens. Just the other week the Klan was doing their parade. And ppl do treat you differently based upon how dark you are. It's just so sad.

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed
Date: October 28 2014

Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 15

This was a goo one, I felt Hiram's fear when he that the klan had came and took them away. 

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed
Date: November 06 2014

Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 44

I feel for Camille but I am glad the heffa is gone. It is between her and the Lord know to account for herself.  

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed
Date: October 13 2015

Title: Chapter 48: Chapter 44

I feel for Camille but I am glad the heffa is gone. It is between her and the Lord know to account for herself.  

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed
Date: October 13 2015

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 129]
Summary:

There is such structure in life. But what happens when you break free? What exists beyond that prison?

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Accordance is a original work by CM and is intended for publication so please do not upload, distort, edit, or remove and place on any other site. Respectfully yours, thank you. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: None
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2400
Read Count: 101625
Published: November 23 2014
Updated: June 24 2019


Title: Chapter 1: Introduction

I love this story. From the drama of both the families to how they connect with each other.these two share a kindred soul and I am so glad to read how they come togetherness.



Author's Response:

Thank you Dallas5Star!! ^_^ I love what you said, "They share a kindred soul" YES. PERFECT DESCRIPTION!

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed
Date: April 12 2015

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 65]
Summary:

He was stuck, having a midlife crisis before the ripe age of fifty. But then he met her. And she became much more than life. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 29164
Read Count: 30448
Published: November 28 2014
Updated: March 13 2015


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Oh Mr. Ken, my heart really goes out to him.  I hope he is finally done w that chick, cause she is just running over him. I can't wait to see how this will turn out w him and the waitress.

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 28 2014

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I like it from Ken's perspective. This was not what I thought it was going to be. It is a pleasant story. I am curious how this will end. You will find your way, take your time it will come. I am so glad Mildred got hers. Most ppl don't know a good thing until it is gone. Are you going to explore why Mildred began the affairs?



Author's Response:

Thank you for your post! I am glad it is not what you had expected. :} I have the ending all planned out in my head. Thank you for your kind words. It is difficult writing, especially when the simplest of words can mean so much but be portrayed differentely than you want them to. I will explore it, but only briefly. My main focus is on Kevin and his recovery, and through that we will learn of Mildred's reasons. 

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: November 29 2014

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 239]
Summary:

Not everyone gets a happy ending...

Hey guys,

Heart of Lies Book 1&2 have now been published under one of my pennames Alma Muerte.

FB Author page: Alma Muerte.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 2951
Read Count: 32560
Published: January 27 2015
Updated: September 10 2015


Title: Heart of Lies

I feel so sad.

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed
Date: July 07 2015

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Sacrifice is all I think about these two. It's so heartbreaking, but I love it. 

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed
Date: June 07 2015

Title: Heart of Lies

That's my girl. Go and destroy the ones that have hurt your beloved.

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed
Date: June 14 2015

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I needed these last two chapters. I was wondering if Alyssa made friends, or reached out to her uncle. She can't wind up without Arric.

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed
Date: September 11 2015

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Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 213]
Summary:

Lia Mariani and Dominic MacCleod were two up and coming leading actors who'd met on set and immediately struck up a friendship.  As the friendship blossomed, they both realized they'd fallen in love with each other.  They were just two chickenshit to admit it because of the differences in their races and his families outdated ideas about black people.  HER parents were afraid of their daughter getting hurt if Dominic decided to bow to the pressure of his families disdain for Lia.  

And hiding in the shadows is a man obsessed with possessing Lia.  Will these outside forces bond them together or tear them apart?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 24
Completed:No
Word count: 40900
Read Count: 139310
Published: April 01 2015
Updated: May 26 2015


Title: Chapter 22: Damages

Now, you got me with the water works.  I am so glad everything is coming together, but i am worried that guy is coming back into the picture.



Author's Response:

Eric has one more brief appearance then he's outta there.

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 03 2015

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 84]
Summary:

 

 

 

 

 

Zaira Jacobs and Eli Jacobs (her son) runs away from their past, from the pain, and from a 6 foot 4 German (Adrian Hitzag).

 

However, Adrian is not too eager to let his beloved mate escape from his grasp.

 

Follow the story of a determine mother, a curious son, and a possessive German.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: BDSM, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 24066
Read Count: 43633
Published: April 01 2015
Updated: January 07 2016


Title: Chapter 1: Opening Credits

This is a very interesting. I can see lil Eli. Can't wait to see how this will turn out.

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed
Date: April 02 2015

Title: Chapter 1: Opening Credits

I hope every one is okay and no major injuries. 

Reviewer: Dallas5star Signed
Date: June 06 2015

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.