Penname: jahchannah [Contact]

Real name: Carlotta

Member Since: January 25 2015

Membership status: Member

Bio:

I love to read and support aspiring authors!




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The trials we survive, the endurance, the scars that we bare both mentally and physically is what makes us survivors. Enduring one tragedy after the other, moving past the pain to reach a higher existence. To go beyond our statutory limitation, to go beyond our self and reveal the being beyond the flesh. This is what survival is all about. 

However this is easier said than done. Nonetheless she will endure, she will feel agony, pain, loss, devastation. She will be wronged, abused, and hated. She will be loved, cherished, and abandoned. She will fight. She will maim. She will kill. Then and only then can she call herself a Survivor.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Horror, Psychological, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:No
Word count: 74621
Read Count: 9861
Published: September 23 2014
Updated: May 23 2016


Title: Chapter 17: Ready Aim Fire

Justine is the spelling typically given to a female and Justin is typically the name given to a male...interesting that you decided to use the female spelling for a male...I wonder if you are trying to imply something about the character...in spite of that strangeness, good job...



Author's Response:

No special emphasis just a mistake thanks for pointing it out glad you enjoyed it anyways stay classy.

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstar
Date: April 28 2016

Title: Chapter 15: Survival

Hope you keep updating...though it's basically another version of the walking dead, it's well written...



Author's Response:

Thank you! I appreciate your feedback and I'm glad you approve of my writing. When I first started writing my story I had no intention of it being like the walking dead. The only similarities I really see between the two is the actual undead and the fact that both characters are fighting to survive. However I hope you continue to read and enjoy my story. Until then...

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Date: March 07 2016

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Summary:


   Caleb Garrison has been in love with Grey ever since they were children. He even told his parents while a child that someday he would marry her. However, there was one problem...although adopted, she was legally his sister.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:Yes
Word count: 29115
Read Count: 36926
Published: October 07 2014
Updated: November 05 2017


Title: Chapter 1: Sister

Good start! I like it!

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed
Date: February 18 2015

Title: Chapter 2: Jealousy

I'm really enjoying this story.

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed
Date: February 18 2015

Title: Chapter 3: Anger * Shame

Poor Caleb. 

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Date: February 18 2015

Title: Chapter 4: Erratic

Good story but it would be good to read Greg's POV.

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Date: February 18 2015

Title: Chapter 5: Timid

They are not related so they should get over it. Good story.

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed
Date: February 18 2015

Title: Chapter 9: Ready

Good story! 



Author's Response:

Thanks!!!!

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: February 18 2015

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[Reviews - 286]
Summary:

SEQUEL to Sasha: the Wallflower. Adaline Lang is an up and coming photographer with more than her own set of problems. During her cousin's wedding she comes face-to-face with the man that she had fallen in love with as a child. Only to find out he was in love with someone else. What will she do to finally be heard and convince him that the perfect women he has been looking for is standing right in front of him?

Dominic Vikhrov is caught between a rock and a hard place. The woman he has fawned after for so many years has finally returned to the United States. But he isn't the only one who is fighting for her heart. Never one to lose, Dominic has his eye on the prize no matter the cost. But will his tunnel vision blind him to something even greater?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Rape, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 37246
Read Count: 40809
Published: October 24 2014
Updated: November 20 2015


Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8

Adaline may be deaf but she surely is not dumb...to hang onto this infatuation with Dominic after he repeats the same behavoir to not acknowledge her before his peers as a teenager and now as an adult suggests a dumb woman...so Adaline should move on to someone who really sees her and is not ashamed of his feelings for her...the typical story would be that Adaline moves on and Dominic gets jealous to come back but why should Adalinewant someone who can't acknowledge her publicly...she needs to understand her own value instead of pining for a man who can't accept her as she is...

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Date: July 03 2015

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Elle always played it safe. She was used to being in control. Every accomplishment in her life was meticulously planned. The only thing she didn't have reign over was her stale love life. When an old flame from a past complicated relationship comes back into her life, she soon finds out everything doesn't go as planned---and that secrets will always come to light.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 28
Completed:No
Word count: 78339
Read Count: 69608
Published: November 03 2014
Updated: March 09 2015


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2

Cute!

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed
Date: February 12 2015

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9

I really dislike this Elle. She's selfish.

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Date: February 12 2015

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

I so don't like Elle's immature antics.

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Date: February 12 2015

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12

I so don't like Elle's immature antics.

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Date: February 12 2015

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13

Again, I hope Elle can begin to treat Dean better. 

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Date: February 12 2015

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14

It's hard to garner sympathy for Elle as I don't get from reading so far why she's so immature and selfish. Her relationship with Justin didn't seem that deep since she knew it was for sex. So her history doesn't jive with her behavior or maybe we're just supposed to watch her finally grow up? I like Dean and the other characters and your story has me interested.  Good work.

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed
Date: February 12 2015

Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Elle deserves to be ignored by Dean.  She's so stupid! Aghhhh, why do Justin any favors even if he begged? She still should have shut him down.  Frustrating!

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed
Date: February 13 2015

Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18

It's good to see Elle start to grow up and shed her fear. Good story.

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Date: February 13 2015

Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21

I like Elle more now. Good job.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your wonderful reviews! I read & appreciate them all. I can only hope you’ll enjoy future updates jahchannah.

CG

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: February 13 2015

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Summary:

Ezekiel's parents took extreme measures to keep him hidden from his controling racist grandfather.  Ezekiel was adopted and raised by Rosa a black woman and his life is now about to take a drastic change.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 11832
Read Count: 40496
Published: November 06 2014
Updated: June 17 2015


Title: Ezekiel Black

Wow!  Zeke now sees how depraved his grandfather is.  I hope he will protect himself!

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed
Date: June 10 2015

Title: Ezekiel Black

Go Zeke! You've written such a great character in Zeke! I'm excited to see what he does next with his grandfather.

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Date: June 17 2015

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Summary:

 

 

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Joss just knows this summer will change her life... If she can manage to tolerate her bunk leader 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Fluff, Original Characters, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 14449
Read Count: 16599
Published: November 08 2014
Updated: May 06 2016


Title: Chapter 9: Treasure Hunt

Stupid Obie and Joss for not having this conversation about the possibility of getting caught and what that means...

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Date: July 02 2015

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Summary:

There is such structure in life. But what happens when you break free? What exists beyond that prison?

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Accordance is a original work by CM and is intended for publication so please do not upload, distort, edit, or remove and place on any other site. Respectfully yours, thank you. 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: None
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2400
Read Count: 101592
Published: November 23 2014
Updated: June 24 2019


Title: Accordance

Really good story!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! <3

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Date: August 26 2015

Title: Accordance

Rae and Hiroto are cute...



Author's Response:

hehehe I think so too! <3

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Date: August 26 2015

Title: Accordance

Excellent...such a deep friendship...



Author's Response:

<3

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 26 2015

Title: Accordance

I like!



Author's Response:

Thank you! <3

Reviewer: jahchannah Signed starstarstarstar
Date: August 26 2015

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.