Penname: pmgayles [Contact]

Real name: Pam gayles

Member Since: October 10 2009

Membership status: Member

Bio:

I just love to read.




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Lotus Flower Bomb by nikki
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 63]
Summary:

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When shannon mckinleys finds herself at a new high school she doesnt know what to do or what will happen. She believes in love at first sight and when she meets Conner, the head football captain and boy of her dreams she couldnt be more happier. Hes charming, sexy, athletic, and everythig shes every wanted in a guy. But what happens when Racheal Truman, queen bee of the school and Conners ex tries to sabatoge their love for her own benifit. Will the stay together or fall apart? And what will happen when they find out something is not right in the suburban paradise.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators or producers o any media franchise. No copyright infringement is inteneded.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General, Supernatural
Genre: Drama, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:No
Word count: 2114
Read Count: 26491
Published: November 13 2011
Updated: January 07 2019

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Title: Lotus Flower Bomb

First, I need to say that Rachel needs to die and with a quickness.  Second, don't any of those fools realize that their are now two alpha's in the picture and that they are mates.  Which makes them way powerful together!!  I love this story so thank you for the update.  Please don't make us wait as long for another update!!



Author's Response: Ha! I completely agree but her time will come. Them two together will be more powerful than anyone can realize but that will be explained later. I love so much when you review so you all won have to wait long for a update lol.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 25 2012
Title: Lotus Flower Bomb

Such an interesting  twist, Shannon's great mother was Connor's grandfathers first mate.  Who woulda thunk?!  Need an update stat!!



Author's Response: Thank you im working on the chapter now

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 02 2012
Title: Lotus Flower Bomb

This chapter was magically, I just loved how Conor broke down how he feels about Shannon.  She makes him a better man who because of her will make a better Alpha.  Damn it made me want a Conor!!  This chapter was crack-a-lacking!!!!  Love me some Conor!!  Those two are in tra-ble!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you Thank you girl you get it lol

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Date: February 25 2013
Title: Lotus Flower Bomb

Shannon should have continued choking Rachel, who would really miss her.  NO one of importance really.  Connor is in trouble, I hope that he's alright.  Please don't make us wait as long for another update.



Author's Response:

Author's Response: Lol that's true but then again she would have gotten in trouble and I'll try not to :-)

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Date: August 28 2012
Title: Lotus Flower Bomb

Who would miss Rachel if she died? I thought that Connor and Shannon were alpha's in the training nit Tony? Color me,confused now. Glad to see this update!



Author's Response: Lol ok I'll clear this up...once they become teens they are old enough to hunt and fight so that's what they are ALL are training for. As for Shannon and Connor, they don't need to train to become alphas it just will happen when the time comes. Hope that helped :)

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Date: September 23 2012
Title: Lotus Flower Bomb

Thank you for the update!!  Go ahead and work your magic on those scenes.



Author's Response:

Lol thank you and no problem :)

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Date: December 29 2012
Title: Lotus Flower Bomb

I would like to read more about their relationship. 



Author's Response:

You got it thank you :)

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: June 02 2014
Title: Lotus Flower Bomb

Thus was a very emotional chapter, I loved her Connor's father broke down after he had schooled him. That man is a daddy and a daddy is a special bred. Any man can father a child but daddy loves that child, disciplines that child raises that child with its mother. This was absolfuckinglutely a great scene to read.  To find out that grandfather is the king of all of the packs blew my mind. Shannon's great grandmother was his first mate so awesome!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: July 03 2013
Title: Lotus Flower Bomb

I have missed this story!!!



Author's Response:

Awe thank you :) I'm not so busy now so another update will be soon.

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Date: May 23 2014
An Arranged Marriage To Satan by EvaJaye
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 131]
Summary:

 

 

Arranged Marriage- a marriage arranged by someone other than the couple getting wedded, curtailing or avoiding the process of courtship.

It's 2009 and Thea Malebranche could have sworn the archaic practice didn't occur here in America. But Apparently, she was mistaken. 

Definition Courtesy of Wikipedia && Banner Courtesy of the lovely Minx

 

 

 

 

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 6105
Read Count: 9631
Published: November 14 2011
Updated: May 17 2012

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Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

"Oh honey, I'm home. I didn't realize we were already having guests over so soon. Really, Ju bear you need to let me know these things. I'm feeling rather overdressed for my welcome home celebration." 

That shit was funny as hell!!!  Did he forget about the Thea was moving or just didn't care and wanted to get is nut one final time?  With the amount of hate that Thea feels towards Julian the sex will be explosive!!

Thanks for the update, you are a rock star!!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 04 2012
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I am looking forward to the progression in their relationship.  In spite of her feelings of hatred she is going to fall for his fine ass and he will fall for her.  I am so glad that this story is back!!

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Date: November 20 2011
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

So Thea unwittingly caught Julien sexual attention, this should be interesting.  I am waiting for Thea to break her foot off in Julien's behind!!  I don't think that your characters are one demensional.  I already have a clear picture of each character when I read.  So now I am wondering what happened to make them behave as they do.  Julien is ho from way back!!

 

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Date: May 17 2012
The One by diarylover
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 121]
Summary:

 

What happens when a player meets the only woman who will make him beg...
This is what Julian finds out when he collides into her...
A story about the perfect synchronocity

This story is my property. Please do not copy or post it or extract it to any other websites. Copyright 2011 VMMckeon

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Character Death, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Rape, Sexual Content , Spritualism, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 23
Completed:No
Word count: 54086
Read Count: 259969
Published: November 14 2011
Updated: August 04 2017

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Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2. Don't leave me...

I have missed this story!!!  I still love Julian!!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 18 2011
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1. Take me home

I would go anywhere Julien wanted to take me and she thought so to!!  I am looking to reading the changes that you are making to this story.

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Date: November 16 2011
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5.You changed everything for me part I

There is about to be some hot, butt-naked sex!!!  I wonder can I have a Julian of my very own?  I would take very good of him, wink, wink, nudge, nudge!!!  lol



Author's Response:

I wouldn't mind either!

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Date: March 23 2012
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3.Why do you care?

I am glad that you are back, I pray that you heal completely!!!  Sorry to hear about your accident!!!  Julian, has it bad already I had forgotten how quickly he had fallen.    I am on pens and needles waiting to read more!!!

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Date: February 17 2012
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9. Fuck them all !

I feel so sorry Julian, his mother is a bitch!!!  I want Vi to realize that Julian is the real deal!!

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Date: March 28 2012
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10. Who the hell are you? Part I.

I am so happy to see this update, I love this story and I am looking forward to adding 'The One' to my e-book collection.  To bad Vi hadn't run sooner but it just makes it more interesting.  She will win over James to her side just like she did in your first version right?

 

Have a wonderful weekend yourself!!!



Author's Response:

Well, a few changes have been made, but in the end it's all good.

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: June 08 2012
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11. Who the hell are you? Part II

Thanx for this update, I have so missed this story.



Author's Response:

You're welcome. Now you can finally get the book and have it all on kindle!

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Date: December 03 2012
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12. Flight or fight

Ethan is an abusive asswipe kill him please!!!



Author's Response:

you're going to be disappointed...

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Date: December 05 2012
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13. Tell me sweet little lies

I really don't like Belinda, that man loved that little girl and she lied to him from the very beginning.  What a lying ho!!!  Belinda and Ethan would be perfect for each other.



Author's Response:

you are funny! I truly never thought of this!

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Date: December 09 2012
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14. In the name of the game

I really don't like Ethan, I am still trying to figure why she married that fool.  Good sex does not make a good marriage especially if the sex is the only thing that you have in the relationship.  I can't wait to get to part where she finally gets away from that ahole!!!



Author's Response:

I encourage you to re-read chapter 8. Maybe you missed it.

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Date: December 16 2012
Victim of the Fall by Lililei
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 108]
Summary:

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Here is the deepest secret nobody knows
Here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud
and the sky of the sky of a tree called life
Which grows higher than soul can hope or mind can hide
and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart
i carry your heart(i carry it in my heart)

A story about what it is to love that which you cannot keep.



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies, Books, Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 32843
Read Count: 66694
Published: November 17 2011
Updated: June 13 2012

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Title: Chapter 9: Surrender

Why is Andrew still with Ingrid? Is it guilt?  Why can''t admit how he feels about Dana?  He is in complete denial, and his so-called friends are aholes!!!  I love this story!!



Author''s Response:

lol you always tell it how it is and i love that! thank you gayles!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: June 04 2011
Title: Chapter 11: Shadows

Dana this ain't going to end well for you, one thing you are not being honest with yourself or Andrew.  You willing giving yourself to man who is only giving you half  of himself knowing that you want all of him.  Nope this won't end well at all.  Dana you stuck on stupid and glued to dumb!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: November 18 2011
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Broken Vows(Take 2) by Cherry
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 34]
Summary:

Eve and A.J. Winters had a life most people dreamed of and a love only a handful ever experienced. But one seeming mistake will test everything they hold dear. Can love truly survive on Broken Vows?

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All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are all MINE. I am is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 10759
Read Count: 9643
Published: November 22 2011
Updated: February 23 2012

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Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2-Cast Album

Oh, the hotness of the the male cast!!!  Me likey!!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed
Date: December 08 2011

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.