Penname: pmgayles [Contact]

Real name: Pam gayles

Member Since: October 10 2009

Membership status: Member

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I just love to read.




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[Reviews - 265]
Summary:

Welcome to the city of Baltimore, MD and into the life of Devyn McKnight. Jewelry designer and entrepreneur, Devyn McKnight, thought she was secure in the shell she built around her life, made of family, friends and her jewelry business but an unexpected encounter challenges all that she is and all that she believes she wants to be.  

 



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: Journey
Chapters: 32
Completed:Yes
Word count: 91963
Read Count: 104090
Published: December 11 2011
Updated: January 07 2014


Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 24

Madeline is cray cray no wonder Eric. Is so special.  I hope that Jason is prepared for the evil trying to marry into his family for money. Thank you for this update!

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Date: July 05 2013

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 66]
Summary:

All is fair in love and war?

That's the way the story goes until Nita Floyd's promotion is handed to the son of her firm's managing partner. Fifteen years on the job, two failed marriages, and a son and daughter who hate her more than life itself, what's Nita's next move. How far will she go to right the wrong especially when her rival re-acquaints her with a little thing called fun.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 11731
Read Count: 49599
Published: December 12 2011
Updated: March 05 2012


Title: Chapter 5: Like Father...Like Son

Russ may be a better role than Nash, Clark is right Nash is a doofus!!  This is going to be interesting when these families meet.  I can't wait!!!

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Date: December 20 2011

Title: Chapter 7: Tentative Agreement

Nita's truly sucks as a parent, but she needs to try and repair the damage.  She can start by spending more time with child.  Start by taking the time that she derserves from that job that doesn't appreciate her.  Russ is riding up on trusty steed to rescue Nita and her family.

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Date: December 27 2011

Title: Chapter 4: The Apple Doesn't Fall Too Far...

That was insightful, however it did reiterate my feelings about her parenting.  She have concentrated on raising her children and not some job where she is being used and not appreciated.  Her children need her, she needs to pay attention to them before it's too late!!!  Great chapter!!1

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Date: December 14 2011

Title: Chapter 2: Introduction - Nita's Struggle

I understand that she has two children but I sure would sending me resume out.  She is working for a firm that does not appreciate her hard work or award employees for loyality.  I say look for another job that won't keep you away from your children, she has sacrificed he childrens happiness for job where hard work is not appreciated.  I wish I could feel bad for her, but she ignored her children.  Don't like Nita right now!!!  I am hoping that my opinion of Nita changes.  I on the side of the babies!!!



Author's Response:

Don't be so hard on her yet. Fear is a motivator not to move. Especially when youre a single mother. You use fear of the unknown as a crutch...when you have viable employment...stepping out and starting over is almost your worst nightmare. All of that along with personal issues influence your actions. Don't judge her yet...she's layered...there's a lot going on with her.

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Date: December 13 2011

Title: Chapter 3: Introduction - Russ the Glutton for Punishment

I love NIta's and Jr's interactions, they quite humorous.  He's already in lust and she is in deep hate. Jr. has a long road ahead of him, and Nita ain't gonna fall the the banana in the tail pipe.  This is going to be good!!!



Author's Response:

They are both hilarious...that much is true

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Date: December 13 2011

Title: Chapter 9: A Step Forward...A Mile Back

Damn she just shut Russ dwon and he was trying to was trying to help her with her hang over.  What a bitch!!!   Nita needs to seek counseling before she loses her children.  I am still not liking Nita right now!!

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Date: January 19 2012

Title: Chapter 10: My Own Worst Enemy

Nita, you are such a bitch!!  Russ has been so nice to you and has even developed a relationship with you family yet you treat him like a bald-headed step-child with a low IQ.  You are wrong for that, Nita.  GIve Russ a break!!

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Date: February 27 2012

Title: Chapter 11: Awkward Indiscretions...

First, I wanted to thank you for the update. I am so disappointed in Nita, she still bkaming Russ for having the jiob that she felt was hers. Why offer that sad apology if she didn't mean it? I wonder who will Nash choose now that he knows that Nita is Russ' wet dream. Nita should be by herself and getting some therapy! Nita just grow up!

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Date: March 05 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 24]
Summary:

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Ah, Love spoken in any other language- the true romance that is Thomas and Dayzee, who I believe are the most romantic couple on the show. Even though, they are not together at this moment, they still leave viewers wanting more.  I noticed they were not represented, so I chose to correct that.  Come fall in love with Thayzee!



Table of Contents
Categories: The Bold and the Beautiful
Characters: None
Classification: Cannon
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 17881
Read Count: 26799
Published: December 13 2011
Updated: August 28 2013


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Ella is so evil please give her a massive heart attack!!!  Me likey!!!



Author's Response:

Ella is a true piece of work aint she?  It's sad that someone can be that evil... but we haven't even scratched the surface yet...  lol

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Date: January 19 2012

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[Reviews - 6]
Summary:

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"Usually, when someone says that a person is going nowhere, he or she is generally referring to the act of standing still. Not moving. Not passing go. Not collecting 200 dollars. And certainly not crashing and burning at the lightning speed. But that's exactly what I was doing. I was going nowhere. Fast. And then I met him..."

Brielle Blackwell-March lives in a whirlwind of sex, drugs, and self-deprecation, taking life by the steering wheel and slamming hard on its gas pedal. She'll do anything to make people see her as more that "That Indian Girl," even if it means riding in Danger's fast lane. But when a graduation night celebration goes awry, that ride comes to a screeching halt. Literally. Seeing Bree's accident as a cry for help, her parents send her to her grandparents' farm in Oklahoma, a Native American farm where she is forced to confront a side of herself that she hates. Brielle is determined to turn a windstorm into a blizzard, but there's one thing that she didn't count on: that the animosity growing between Aiden Poway, her grandparent's delivery boy, and herself would scorch her wintry veins. And we all know that when things boil over, they sometimes spark flames.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Taking a short break from this story
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 10638
Read Count: 2248
Published: December 15 2011
Updated: February 03 2012


Title: Chapter 2: Free Falling

The stupidiy of children! Bri needs help, she is lost. She allows Johnny to use her for sex, Johnny ain't cute to me. So I sm not seeing theatraction. Caleb, poor Johnny ain't gay sweetheart you don't stand a chance! Can't wait as it to read more although I hope to see thses charactrts grow.rr



Author's Response:

You said it perfectly. These kids are seriously lacking in the common sense department. However, they wouldn't really be teenagers if they weren't. They'll grow, especially Bree. Just wait and see. And as for what everyone sees in Johnny, well he's like that guy (and everyone knows someone like this) who isn't really attractive and doesn't have a good personality, but still manages pull in women. I've never understood this either, but stay tuned to watch it unfold.

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Date: December 15 2011

Title: Chapter 3: All the King's Horses

Brielle is stupid,  It makes me wonder what other crazy thing that she has gotten herself in.  Her parents are acting like she was the one drinking and driving.  It hurts my heart to read a story where young people are so stupid and have no conscience of how the decisions that they make now will affect their future.  So sad!!



Author's Response:

I'm glad that you're just as irritated in her as I am. She really is annoying to write and I honestly wouldn't know how to if I hadn't known people like her when I was younger. She will soon be on a road to redemption though. I promise you, so stay tuned.

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Date: December 22 2011

Title: Chapter 5: ON HIATUS

I understand, but school is much more important!



Author's Response:

Thank you for understanding pmgayles. I think that when I finally do update, I will post two at a time. At least for my first time back, since I've made you all wait so long.

 

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Date: February 03 2012

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 22]
Summary:

Take away love and our earth is a tomb ~ Robert Browning

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: On hiatus indefinitely
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 6
Completed:No
Word count: 5754
Read Count: 23287
Published: December 19 2011
Updated: February 27 2012


Title: Chapter 3: II. Not one for goodbye...

Why is Zoe running from Keaton and her feelings?  I like these characters so please continue.

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Date: December 21 2011

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[Reviews - 40]
Summary:

 

Will they...

 

Won't they...

 

Three months in and Lulu and Dennison haven't moved beyond first base...

 

Will they...

 

Won't they...



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Crackfic, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: While We're In Love
Chapters: 6
Completed:Yes
Word count: 7425
Read Count: 9161
Published: December 20 2011
Updated: February 20 2012


Title: Chapter 2: Perceptions of Reality

That cracked me up. with friends like LuLu dand Dennison don't need enemies.  I love these two!!!

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Date: December 20 2011

Title: Chapter 6: More Than Words

I so love Lulu and Dennison, they are so cute. Lulu is finally breaking Den off a piece! She finally admitted that she loves Den! I can't wait to read more.

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Date: February 20 2012

Rated: All Ages
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Summary:

 

 

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Christmas is a time of giving and Henrietta Young is about to give the perfect gift to someone who doesn't deserve it.

 

 

The Gift  is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Inspirational
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: The Gift
Series: New Beginnings
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3349
Read Count: 5917
Published: December 21 2011
Updated: December 21 2011


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was a powerful begiming snd I am hooked!



Author's Response:

Thanks PM and have a very merry Christmas!

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Date: December 21 2011

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Summary:

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Sometimes when it comes to family and their issues, a lie is more acceptable than reality.

 

Acceptable Lies is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 93404
Read Count: 94675
Published: December 23 2011
Updated: January 19 2013


Title: Acceptable Lies

I was hoping for some violence against his father!!  I have to say it again, I don't like Sugar, Albert or Sydney!!  Audrey looks like she may have some sense and actually truly love her love.  I hope the muse comes back, becasue I love this story!!!  Happy New Year!!!

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Date: January 01 2012

Title: Acceptable Lies

Just makes you how both Honey and Gabriel turned out do well. Don't like thre the Wainrights and Sugar makes my teeth itch. Syndey is jealous heifer!. Please let us read what Gabe says to his sperm donor!!!! I love this story!!!



Author's Response:

LOL  Gabe is going to lay it on his father for sure.  More is coming soon.

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Date: December 28 2011

Title: Acceptable Lies

I am so happy that Trevon left Sydney's stupid ass!!  Sydney you are such a punk!!  Honey why did you say yes Gabriel if you really didn't want to marry him?  Do you really want a big wedding or is the your way of putting Gabe off?  That man loves you quit being stupid!!  Great update Brenda!!



Author's Response:

You know that girl wants a big wedding, plus Audrey wants a big wedding.  All Gabe wants is to marry Honey.  He doesn't care about the wedding part.  Maybe she'll listen to her father and compromise.

More coming soon!

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Date: April 14 2012

Title: Acceptable Lies

Brenda you are the best, I have been waiting for an update for this story and I am not disappointed.  Albert is so evil and I am afraid that Gabe is allowing his love for his judgement when it comes to his father.  Sugar maybe smarter than I gave her credit for.  Bruce had better true with his feelings for Sugar because she ain't wrapped to tight.  I want Albert to be run over by a bus!!!

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Date: January 09 2012

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Deception

Brenda, I love Gabe!!!  To bad his parents are assholes!!!  I feel so sorry for Honey because first of all her name is Honey and her momma is a gold digging ho.  She's old ho at that, just so sad!!!  Brenda I so love your stories!!

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Date: December 23 2011

Title: Chapter 2: Cast Pictures

To bad Lee is gay because he is fine!!!!  I am loving the cast!



Author's Response:

Yes, well we can't have them all, can we?  LOL

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Date: December 24 2011

Title: Acceptable Lies

My opinion of Sugar just went up, Albert don't know who he's messing with.  I am so hooked and I can't wait to read about what is going to happen next!!!

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Date: January 23 2012

Title: Acceptable Lies

Sydney you a such a punk!!!  I can't wait for Albert to go down and I hope that he loses everything, his marriage and his children and some money!!!  Why didn't Sugar ever mention the pictures that she recieved to Honey?  Brenda I love this story!!!

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Date: January 30 2012

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.