This was an amazing story from beginning to end. I must say I know that Amiya is Pierce's teach but damn they are consenting adults and I think Amiya needs Pierce to loosen her up a little she needs to be able to have someone to go home too even if its her very sexy student. I don't think she will let their "sexual" relationship interfer with how she grades and teaches him. That was some hot scenes. Thanks for sharing.

Wow...That was just...WOW!!!! I swear Sienna and John are the two most complicated people. They so want each other but the games they play makes it that much more intense. She wants John and she knows she wants John but she fears wanting him just about as much as she truly wants him. She hasn't had the greatest track record with men and for some reason she keeps lumping John in with those jack asses that failed her. But I guess the fact that he keeps coming back is slowly breaking through the walls that she has surrounding herself with. This fantasy is getting very kinky and I can't wait to read more. I think its the Assemblyman at the door thinking he is going to get some of Sienna's cookies. I think he might need a swift kick in the pants because he is married and has children. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Well, hot damn you just left it right there, how could you??? Any that was some HOTT ASS MATING going on between John and Sienna. I mean even in the throughs of passion those two are always thinking always trying to plan their next move, always trying to hide behind the walls that they built for themselves regarding love and togetherness. The chess match is almost a stalemate because even though they can get each other in a check, the check mate can't come if they won't allow the other to win. Sienna is trying to keep John out but he seems to be engraining himself into her life and she seems to not want to care but she does. It's no longer just about sex. Looking forward to the next chapter.

For I would like to see the a chapter in He Ry's POV because maybe it would give us insight to what he is truly feeling. I know he explained part of who he is to Val, and it gave me some helpful information but I feel like it's always one sided only because we don't get to see Henry's feelings when Val pushes him away. At the end of the last chapter we could feel for Val because Henry hadn't called or txted but I think there is a bigger picture as to why he hadn't done it. At the end of the day it would be interesting to see how it plays into the flow of the story. 

This was a great first chapter to a story Im looking forward to reading. Charlie and Rebecca in the beginning paragraphs had a love that was worth everything. He knew her like the back of his hand and didn't expect anything that she wasn't about to give. He truly loved her and he thought he had found everything he needed within her. Her dying left him open and wounded to the point of not being able to have most likely those final moments with her. He is now with her best friend Eve and this is a new and different type of love that he has for her. It scares him because how can he love her so deeply when he was going to spend the rest of his life with Rebecca??? The answer is as simple for him to grasp. Eve brings something new and refreshing into his life that he never thought possible to have. Him remembering Rebecca seems to be his way to stay connected to her without dishonoring her memory. Eve got being selfish stems for the fact that she knows Charlie so well and she loves him just the same. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Nothing really changed in this chapter but the emotion of what John feels and how he has hurt, keep secrets, and lied to Sienna. I think for some reason even though the words didn't change the tone did. It's like I can feel John agonizing about all the decisions he has made. It's like wanting to change things, knowing you should change it, but a fear keeps you tied to the choice that you made even though sometimes you wish you had done things differently. The more time that both John and Sienna have time to think and be in their own heads the more their is this need to say, do, or try to understand but failing at it because they keep quiet, stew in their own heads, and make rash decisions without thinking about the consequences. Looking forward to the next chapter.

I was enjoying Sienna's fantasy very much so. I see nothing much really changed in this chapter but I must admit these two crack me up they do and say something and then they wait for the other to respond with a type of consequence. It's almost like when my anxiety gets the better if me, it's at that point I feel most alive. Both Sienna and John seem to not be able to breath until there is a shit storm of words being thrown at them. He doesn't want her to take the morning after pill but at the same time she is thinking about the possibility as if its possible but she doesn't want John to know that. It's a power struggle of not only wills but love. They so don't know how to talk to each other when it comes to the words of the heart. One step coward three steps backwards. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Lol, I don't know how you can say that nothing really changed in this chapter. A whole lot changed. We see John not only thinking he is trapping Sienna back the. But how he and Peach Fuzz have an understanding a bond that seems to calm him in away. Princess being a "spy" for her mother is new as well but Princess holds that cards when it comes to her family she wields a power thAt neither John nor Sienna understand. I love how even now when John thinks about his life or his children it brings a calm over him. While he is too busy trying to figure Sienna out without showing his humans the one and most important thing to both he and Sienna are their children. Too made that energy spent on making their children happy can't spread to them making themselves happy instead of always having to maneuver around like a chess match, when they truly just want each other. Looking forward to the next chapter.

I have to say this was a great chapter of John/Sienna/Jays first meeting if each other. John having to decide on what he wanted to do with his life since he was being discharged was an interesting beginning. Sienna playing him along with Jay was a very nice touch. Back to the present Sienna realizing that they didn't use protection was priceless. Looking forward to the next chapter.

I must say I am truly liking the flow of the story Sienna and John both don't seem as tightly closed off as they were in the original. Don't get me wrong I loved the original but this one truly feels different maybe it's the added details that are making it flow a lot differently then the original story. Anyway I loved how John is whistling to a song that brings back memories for the both of them. Him getting Sienna a new pair of sweat pants was cut. Both over thinking this situation but both feeling something as well. They may try to hide from each other but they truly understand each other in a way that makes their lack of communication not only understandable but helps one to understand their motives in every thing they do. Looking forward to the next chapter.

I don't know how I feel about the rewrites but I will enjoy this story no matter how many times you rewrite it. With that said Sienna and John are one of my favorite couples because their dysfunctional marriage is something that they both seem to needed even when they are fighting so hard to deny it. John love Sienna and deep down Sienna loves John, even when he is distant because what she really wants is him. It's so hard for them both to say the words but then they missinterrupt each others actions. Looking forward to the next chapter. 

I swear the one running theme that both Sienna and John seem to do is jump to conclusions without the facts. They assume the worse because somewhere deep inside them they use it as a protective mechanism. But in reality the only thing it does is push them away from each other because basically that is where they want to be. Like Sienna said, "he got through her walls." He penetrated the walls that she built up do to the other assholes in her life. But the one thing I find very interesting is the fact that she let Bryan have a voice whereas she won't give one to John. She would rather lump him in with the other assholes that listen to him, because if she were to listen to him, she would have to open a door that she so badly wants to protect but at the same time let him in. It's funny it's like a game of tug-a-war and at the end of both side is Sienna and in the middle is John. She has concluded that the asshole side has won but the she loves him side aint given up. Looking forward to the next chapter.