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Having chosen modeling over ministry, Jeremy Ferguson had often felt his father's scorn and disapproval.  Now he was coming home to visit and bringing the love of his life, Aura Vanderleigh who happens to be black.  Growing up in South Carolina, Jeremy knows what his father's reaction will be even if he is a minister!

 

The Preacher's Son is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2009 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Racism
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2681
Read Count: 117071
Published: July 31 2011
Updated: June 02 2014


Title: The Preacher's Son

I really like this story.  I sat here and read the whole thing and was surprised when it kept getting longer and longer since you were updating it as I was reading (lol).  I can't wait for the next update.

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Date: August 01 2011

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 28]
Summary:

They had one rule. They keep it out of the office.

 

....Watch it get broken.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:Yes
Word count: 7092
Read Count: 7391
Published: August 09 2011
Updated: March 18 2012


Title: Chapter 1: The Office

They are cute!!!  I can't wait for the next chapter :-) 

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Date: August 09 2011

Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

Leslie West is a quiet beautiful southern belle who just moved up to New York, Blake Caldron is a fashion guru who can't seem to keep his eyes off of a new church attendee. Due to certain circumstances he needs to watch from a far... But for how long?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Rape, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:No
Word count: 28720
Read Count: 32905
Published: August 14 2011
Updated: December 31 2013


Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15- Dilemma

What the hell...Marco is crazy!!!  Leslie should not have put any credence to a rumor being spread by the one person who would not want to see Blake and her together and who had an extramarital affair with her current fiance's ex-wife.  Marco spreading that rumor had everything to gain from Leslie's mistrust of Blake and she just fell into that. I know Blake did her wrong, but she did agree to marry him, and if she's going to do that, she has to learn to trust him instead of believing ol' boy Marco.  I can't wait for the next chapter!!  Happy New Year!!! 

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Date: December 31 2011

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4- The Longest Day

I'm glad she kicked Blake's lying behind to the curb and met Marco.  I can't wait to see who Leslie ends up with.  

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Date: August 17 2011

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Lucas Spaulding waited three years before he could claim his woman his mother brought into their privilaged home. She swore that she would never leave, now it looks like she needs to be reminded who she belongs to. she's on notice. Lucas is on the hunt and he doesn't intend to play fair.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Chains & Whips Excite Me
Series: The Alphas of Spaulding Inc.
Chapters: 12
Completed:No
Word count: 41598
Read Count: 72713
Published: August 17 2011
Updated: July 26 2012


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

I like Luke and all, but I think Gabe is my favorite one.  I'mma need you to do a story for him too. :-)



Author's Response:

Gabe's my favorite too.  And I was debating on if I should kill him off.  If he survives CM, he will get his own story.  Him or Mikey.

Maybe I can collaberate with another author for them.

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Date: August 18 2011

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I liked it :-)  I wonder how Christina is going to react to this development...

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Date: August 18 2011

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I like how you started and am interested in seeing where you go with it but, Luke to me was really intense and needs to calm down because nothing can happen for a long while.  

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Date: August 17 2011

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Amaris Manning was a woman that was over six feet tall.  Julian Arrington was just a little over five six.  They were attracted to one another from the beginning, but would it be a good fit?  She was sexually repressed.  He was sexually promiscuous. She was looking for a relationship and he was avoiding one at all costs. She was black and he was white.  They were totally opposite in every way, yet their hearts didn't seem to hear their heads talking!

 

Good Things in A Small Package is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 38
Completed:Yes
Word count: 169606
Read Count: 138572
Published: August 22 2011
Updated: August 28 2014


Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 11 There Really Is No Place Like Home II

Oh no!!!  Poor Daniel and Tamera!!!  I hope everything will be all right.

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Date: September 12 2011

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 2 Leaving Your Comfort Zone

I really like this story so far, partially because I'm from DC so the cities and areas mentioned are so familiar.  I can't wait to see what happens not only to Amaris and Julian but, also with Tamara and Daniel as well.



Author's Response:

I'm in richmond, not too far from DC.  My brother in law is there so I am somewhat familiar with the area, but I still had to look on the map to remember some of the outlying areas they have taken us to.  More is coming soon.  Thanks for the review!

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Date: August 23 2011

Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 10 There Really Is No Place Like Home

I'm mad Mrs. Wilmington reacted the way she did.  It is sad because she was such a major influence in Amaris' life.  Marri's mother and Seleah are a trip and a half.  At least they are like as long as the man has money it doesn't matter what race he is.  They are too much.  It will be an interesting wedding for sure.

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Date: September 09 2011

Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 29 Disaster and Decisions

Amaris and Julian need to sit down and have a real conversation about what's going on.  Amaris is overwhelmed and while she loves Julian and Justine, life really threw her for a loop because of Justine's scheming mother and she needs time to adjust.  Julian is being insensitive to what Amaris is going through and I hope he sees it before Amaris walks out of the door.  Joseph was right about Darrell and his nonsense.  Seleah and the boys needs to move up near Joseph.  I hope when he goes down there that weekend, he kicks Darrell's ass for vandalizing Seleah and the boys' home.  



Author's Response:

The conversation is comingup in the next chapter I'm working on.  As for Darrell more of him is coming up in the next chapter~!

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Date: December 17 2011

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 574]
Summary:

 

 

Mal has wanted her since the first night they met. CoCo has been fighting her instant attraction from day one. Will past dirty deeds keep these two from the one thing they both need...each other.

DISCLAIMER: All publically recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. (ME!!) The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

ME&U is an original work of fiction please do not copy or post this story to any other websites.

ME&U © 2011 by C.E. Givens (Elizablu)

###DUE TO A FUCKING THIEF KALANI ZOLDYCK, I TOOK MY STORIES DOWN###



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Kitten's Bed & Bath
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 9674
Read Count: 127046
Published: September 02 2011
Updated: September 22 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Are Francis and Coco half sisters??  I hope Coco beats her down cuz she causes too much trouble.  Why is Francis still chasing after Mal when Mal and everyone told her skanky behind he doesn't want you???  Darren needs to man up and leave this girl.  He is so in denial...



Author's Response:

oohh!! Francis and CoCo half sisters?! That will be a nightmare of the highest power!!! Maybe they are related? Francis is just trying to get CoCo riled up and she hates CoCo guts. Thanks for reading!!

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Date: September 02 2011

Title: ME&U

I luv this story!!!  Cayenne's ass needs to be handed to her as soon as possible.  She is the worst excuse of a human being ever!  She doesn't care about her child.  She is ready to hand her child over to this bastard who wants to kill her.  What type of person does that??  I need an update like yesterday. :-)



Author's Response:

So glad that you love TEAMMAL! You asked what type of person would just hand her daughter over to killer...a person with no soul. Thanks for reading!

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Date: April 13 2012

Title: ME&U

Damn...I almost feel sorry for him, but not really.  He messed with the wrong people.



Author's Response:

Yep, he did messed with the wrong clan. Thanks for reading.

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Date: January 28 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 302]
Summary:

 

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Lorilei Riley is a large black girl who was uprooted at age five when her mother marries and relocates to the small mostly white mining town of Appalachia.  She is the object of ridicule and scorn.  She immediately bonds with Micah Hamilton a young classmate who is also an outsider because of a large growth on his face.

Micah gets a chance at a normal life by having a surgery to remove the growth and Lorilei wonders as they both reach adulthood if Micah has remained with her out of friendship and loyalty or if a guy like him, could really come to  love a plus size girl like her.

 

In The Eyes of the Beholder is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



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Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Ugly Girls Need Love Too
Series: None
Chapters: 2
Completed:Yes
Word count: 84367
Read Count: 80705
Published: September 29 2011
Updated: June 15 2012


Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

Poor Sabrina...lol



Author's Response:

LOL.  Don't feel too sorry for her...

She got her python didn't she????

 

 

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Date: October 11 2011

Title: In The Eyes of the Beholder

I'm glad Lei told that mean old man the truth!!!  He needs some help or else he's going to keel over from all that mean.  Meredith's mother is shallow.  All she sees is the surface.  I'm glad Micah told her off and included Emily in the commercial.



Author's Response:

Mrs. Greenly is from SC and she's old school.  Black and white don't go together in her mind.  More is coming soon.

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Date: October 13 2011

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Tyler could count on one hand the number of attempted, but failed relationships that he had; had. It was getting to the point that he just was ready to give up on finding love or the right person he could give his entire self to. Most of the women he had a relationship with didn't last long not because they didn't want it, they just couldn't handle his faults or flaws. Tyler Hollis had a secret an extremely large secret that over the years, he had learned how to control to an extent, but at some point in the relationship, it would become the topic of conversation and downhill the relationships would go. He was looking for that one special woman that wouldn't mind them; he wasn't sure if she was the one, but the way he was feeling about her he wanted to make her the one. It wasn't very many women he had wanted in his thirty-eight years, but her he felt he couldn't live without.

♥ ஒ Love ஒ ♥...

Kayla had only had two real relationships in her life, okay let's be honest one and she wasn't even sure that was the real thing. It had been over seven years ago. She had always focused on her career, she was what they called a workaholic, her best friends India and Traci would tell her she was sexually deprived, that she needed to started living before she woke up one morning and life had passed her bye. However, never in her right mind did she think she would be in a predicament like this, it was totally out of her character to let something like this happen, and to let it happen like this. It was overwhelming more like surreal an impulsive act, or so she thought. Could it have been a calculating move on his part or was it just something that happened to happen. But if they both were completely honest with themselves it had been building ever since that faithful snowy morning.

♥ ஒ Love ஒ ♥...

Disclaimer: There is no Copyright Infringement intended. The names and characters in this story are of my own creation, so any similarities to any person or person's in this story dead or alive fictional or non-fictional is purely coincidental. Any and all recognizable characters involved in the images are solely owned and the property of their respective owners or by an unknown developer THAT IS NOT ME!! I do not own it/them and will not make money on them. The author of this story is in no way associated with the franchise/franchises of any creators, producer, owner or any media that may be used along with this story.

© Kaleah, 2011.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female, Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 47
Completed:Yes
Word count: 218680
Read Count: 113895
Published: October 03 2011
Updated: January 01 2013


Title: Chapter 17: Sweet Revenge and Bitter Romance

She needs to figure it out and tell Tyler that she is pregnant.    

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Date: December 20 2011

Title: Chapter 14: Obstacles Of Love, Loss, and Family

Poor Kayla...Tyler's mom just attacked her.  There are some underlying issues there. That was not cool at all.  I hope that Tyler gets to see his mom from that more negative perspective because Kayla was completely uncomfortable and did not deserve that type of rude and nasty behavior from anybody at any time, but especially on Christmas from a person whose son invited her into their home. 

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Date: December 01 2011

Title: Chapter 18: Absence Makes The Heart Grow Fonder

I hope nothing crazy happens to Kayla while they're apart...This chapter has like "caution: trouble ahead" signs all over it.  I want to know what's going to happen next...

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Date: December 27 2011

Title: Chapter 19: Affliction, Reflection & Expectation

Oh no...I don't like this Catherine chick...not at all!!!  I hope Aaron, Tyler, Alex and Jasmine solve this case real quick and puts Catherine's conniving ass in jail where her gold digging behind and cowardly lover, Perry, belong so that Tyler can get back to Kayla and she can tell him that she's pregnant. 

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Date: January 03 2012

Title: Chapter 22: Its Been A Hard Days Night

LMAO!! Aaron is too much!!!  Milk Chocolate is his favorite dessert...ha ha ha!  Tyler you need to call Kayla back.  As Aaron said your "wife" is crazy because of all the pregnancy hormones...

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Date: January 22 2012

Title: Chapter 15: Love’s Misunderstanding The Choices We Make

I wonder where Kayla's need for her rules came from??  Kayla needs to stop being overly cautious and take a leap of faith with Tyler.  She wants to be close to Tyler, but then she tries to push him away when he wants to make more of a commitment to her.  Being a little apprehensive is normal, but I think there is something more to it than that.  Kayla and Tyler need to have a honest conversation about their relationship concerns and the issue with Tyler's mother.  It was understandable that they were both upset and emotional, but they need to talk about these matters now that they have had time away from that situation.  Right now, these concerns are the two giant elephants in the room and if they are not addressed now, they will come to haunt them later...

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Date: December 06 2011

Title: Chapter 36: Finding My Way Back Home

Tyler needs to stop.  He can't keep Kayla in a bubble and go all crazy every time she talks to a guy.  He needs to trust her enough to know that she's as committed to their relationship as he is.  But, this theme keeps happening between the two of them.  Why doesn't he trust her and why is he so jealous of everyone else around her.  I understand being protective and possessive, but I think Tyler is a bit obsessive and crazy with it and needs to calm down.

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Date: June 21 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 359]
Summary:

  

 

Lila James knows that her friendship with seventeen year old Chase Almeida is extremely inappropriate, but she still isn't prepared when his older brother Jack decides to tell her just how inappropriate it actually is-- inadvertently igniting a fire that had been burning quietly inside of them for years.

*****Lila's Thunder has been removed for editing, refining and if all goes according to plan, publishing! I couldn't have finished it without all my readers leaving their words and thoughts--even if I didn't always like them--so THANK YOU from the bottom of my heart. <3



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 670
Read Count: 64816
Published: October 07 2011
Updated: September 09 2014


Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

OMG...why did he do that?  

Reviewer: dcphoenix1 Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 09 2012

Title: Chapter 12: Lila's Thunder Published!

Congratulations!!! I will definitely buy the book :-)

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Date: September 10 2014

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.