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Title: Chapter 7

I really really like this story! I can relate to Val. I'm not that extreme but I definitely have said or thought like her on several occasions and its crazy cuz you never think you're that bad until you see another side of it. I think Henry is good for her and vice versa. Their chemistry is off the charts I can't wait till they get to the prolouge part so we can see what happened before the sex. I can't wait for the next add!

 Reviewer: aDreamaFantasy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 08 2013 03:33 am
Title: Chapter 7

I don't know if I feel sorry for her or not..

Did he really say he isn't interested in a relationship?

um.. overseas relationship are VERY hard time zone and an ocean apart :o

 Reviewer: lilsunseeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 08 2013 03:18 am
Title: Chapter 7

I hope she can trust her instincts. 

 Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: July 07 2013 06:16 pm
Title: Chapter 7

Wow, this was crazy and so sad.  People were cruel to her and her family didn't give sanctuary or make her feel loved.  Val was right in what she told Henry he was wrong but he wasn't wrong by himself. That woman was married and good and grown when she broke her vows. Henry was young and stupid and he learned a valuable lesson. It's time for you both to let go of the past. Snap, crackle pop this was good!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 07 2013 03:09 pm
Title: Chapter 7

Aww Henry is TOO cute! Totally LOVE him! Good work.

 Reviewer: Dallasstar1725 Anonymous starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 07 2013 08:57 am
Title: Prologue

Absolutly love this! For some reason i imagine harry styles as Henry! Can not wait to see how things turn out!

 Reviewer: Lucy_william Signed [Report This]
Date: July 04 2013 05:10 am
Title: Prologue

I don't know how I missed this gem.  I love your writing style.   I'm so glad Henry has gotten under Val's skin.  I look forward to the next update!

 Reviewer: Brenda1257 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 03 2013 12:47 pm
Title: Chapter 6

Another great update can't wait to see where there relationship ends up

 Reviewer: luv2read Signed [Report This]
Date: July 01 2013 06:12 am
Title: Prologue

Ready to find out about her secret.  What is up with Peter and Ella?  Those two are up to something, and Henry, although he may not be involved, knows what it is. 

 Reviewer: Penelope Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 01 2013 02:16 am
Title: Chapter 6

Very cute chapter! I really enjoyed the relaxed banter between Valerie and Henry! Valeries dad is a trip.

 Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 30 2013 07:33 pm
Title: Chapter 6

Great chapter.. the walls are coming down. 

 Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 30 2013 06:58 pm
Title: Chapter 5

I'm glad Henry is trying to breakdown Valerie's defensive walls. 

 Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 30 2013 05:40 pm
Title: Chapter 6

MOAR.  NOW. 

 Reviewer: tens Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30 2013 05:31 pm
Title: Chapter 4

Another great chapter. 

 Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 30 2013 05:23 pm
Title: Chapter 6

It was nice reading about Val willing to let go and enjoy what is happening with Henry. Val's father is an ahold and Val needs to free herself from the oppression of her family! Great chapter!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 30 2013 05:01 pm
Title: Chapter 3

This chapter was amazing and full of depth and detail. 

I cannot wait to see how Val over processes the night. 

 Reviewer: 1nadali Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 30 2013 03:38 pm
Title: Chapter 6

This story is so cute it hurts to read it - cute in the best possible way.

Valerie and Henry are gorgeous together and I'm rooting for Henry help Valerie conquer her demons once and for all.

Loving this little gem of a story!   

 

 Reviewer: londongirl Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30 2013 12:14 pm
Title: Prologue

This is so cute it hurts. And it's so well humored and written. I'm really loving every single update. I don't want Val to lose this one. He's a true gem

 Reviewer: ElegantBunny Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30 2013 09:08 am
Title: Chapter 6

Gosh, I'm loving this story! Henry's little break down over the silence made me laugh. Ooh getting down in the kitchen, Val has a lot more restraint then me, plus Peaches and Apples?! Yes.

I can not wait to the next update.

 

 

 Reviewer: BeautySpot Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30 2013 08:54 am
Title: Chapter 5

This is so cute. Its a nice story and i cant wait to find thebig secret.

 Reviewer: nikol Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 25 2013 11:12 pm
Title: Chapter 5

Just reading this made me smile too, love the story btw, thanks for sharing. I'm starting to be an addict so plz give me some more...

 Reviewer: Lindy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 25 2013 10:00 pm
Title: Chapter 5

Very cute! Henry is so adorable. I'm glad that V is finally getting it together :-) 

 Reviewer: Dallasstar1725 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: June 25 2013 05:31 pm
Title: Chapter 5

Poor Valerie I wish she would have more confidence in herself! I like Henry.

 Reviewer: Cali2mt406 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 25 2013 03:36 pm
Title: Chapter 5

I really want Val to quit her job and limit the exposure to her so called loving family. Her father is a beast who deserves to be shit with a tranquilizer dart! Loving Henry! Me thinks her father doesn't like to see her happy and he should go to hell for that! Great update. Val still needs a new therapist.



Author's Response:

lmao@ Val still needs a new therapist. I love it! Thank you!!

 Reviewer: pmgayles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 25 2013 02:28 pm
Title: Chapter 4

Very nice update.  I think Valerie and Henry are going to be VERY good together.  I hope Henry is not playing with her.  She has already had men treat her poorly...she deserves a "good" guy, who knows how to be a bad boy. LOL.

Looking forward to next update.

Nyeesha

 Reviewer: Nyeesha Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2013 03:42 am


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