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[Reviews - 452]
Summary:

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banner by minx 


Danielle Roberts affectionately known as Dani to everyone, has what everyone else seems to want, money, power and respect.  But she doesn't have the one thing that she wants, love.Chad Collins is everybody's All-American. He's got the career, the money and the chicks throwing themselves at him, but he doesn't have the one he wants, Dani.


They've both signed the contract with "the clause".  Will they be able to overcome it and find the true love they've both been waiting on?


Another Installment of Kerrington & Associates


All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Kerrington & Associates
Chapters: 25
Completed:Yes
Word count: 43047
Read Count: 76819
Published: March 17 2010
Updated: April 02 2012


Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Really enjoying the story. Are you going to update it so Dani and Chad have closure?

Update soon please!



Author's Response:

Yes ma'am. I'm formulating the closure now. 

Reviewer: londongirl Signed
Date: November 15 2011

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 150]
Summary:

 

Natasha Roberts is a paediatrician with a healing touch and warm smile at 30 years of age, she is a beautiful woman with a broken spirit which she keeps hidden. When with her group of friends she is the listner, understander and the one her friends depend on for all the answers. Her secret is she that is unable to have children which is the reason her ex-husband gave her for their divorce, she lives to heal children even if it reminds her of what she can never have.

Angelo Luciano Salvatore is a mob boss and the head of the Salvatore Crime Family. He likes to think of himself as a business man when most would call him a ruthless bastard. The day his wife died he become a heartless shell who begins to neglect his son turning to his business for comfort. Until his son is taken to the hospital for a simple check up and is found to have the very disease that killed his mother Polycystic kidney disease. which in time would have killed him if not for Natasha who falls in love with the Christopher’s loving soul and finds herself as a match to donate one of her own kidneys to save his life. When Angelo meets Natasha he is cold and hurtful , Natasha in turn gives him a piece of her mind. Hands on her hips her eyes spitting fire she tells him off then walks away leaving Angelo to reflect on her words and the beautiful woman that Saved his son and made him whole once again.

 (The Banner is a temp until I can make something better. I just wanted to give the reader an idea of the characters I have in mind.)



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Comedy , Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 4521
Read Count: 11988
Published: June 14 2010
Updated: November 19 2013


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I'm really enjoying the story, but I have to say even in fiction the idea of a doctor donating a kidney to a patient and being up and able to take on a full work load seems unreal. However, as I like the story so far I'll put that aside and just enjoy.

When do you think you'll be able to update.  



Author's Response:

 thank you for the review. I hope you enjoy the new chapter, sorry for the long wait.

Reviewer: londongirl Signed
Date: October 21 2011

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 287]
Summary:

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"Power is the ultimate aphrodisiac.”- Henry Kissinger

 

In the game of social politics not everyone has power and some don’t understand the power they wield. The power to make and break lives rest in the hands of one man but be careful, he is always watching.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Friendship, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dubcon, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:No
Word count: 36415
Read Count: 69898
Published: December 14 2010
Updated: November 09 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Wasn't sure about this story to begin with, but after coming back to it I've really enjoyed the story that you're telling.

Reviewer: londongirl Signed starstarstarstar
Date: September 25 2011

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Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 213]
Summary:

For married author Dove Morgan, the trip to the big city was the first in a series of things she never thought she'd do. 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Crackfic, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:No
Word count: 44246
Read Count: 29159
Published: July 27 2011
Updated: April 08 2012


Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 11

Now I'm not one to promote adultery, but it seems to me like Dove needs to be treasured and obviously needs some good sex. Since she's not getting it at home Xavier seems like the obvious choice.

Though it seems like these were moments of calm before the storm.

Reviewer: londongirl Signed
Date: December 20 2011

Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 12 pt.1

Love this story and Dove and Xavier. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Reviewer: londongirl Signed
Date: January 19 2012

Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 12 part II

Please, I beg of you, give Xavier and Dove a HEA. I don't want Dove to have to look back on this time nostaglically.

I'm waiting with bated breath for the next installment.

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Date: January 20 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 586]
Summary:

 

 

Mal has wanted her since the first night they met. CoCo has been fighting her instant attraction from day one. Will past dirty deeds keep these two from the one thing they both need...each other.

DISCLAIMER: All publically recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. (ME!!) The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.

ME&U is an original work of fiction please do not copy or post this story to any other websites.

ME&U © 2011 by C.E. Givens (Elizablu)

###DUE TO A FUCKING THIEF KALANI ZOLDYCK, I TOOK MY STORIES DOWN###



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Kitten's Bed & Bath
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 9674
Read Count: 127261
Published: September 02 2011
Updated: September 22 2014


Title: ME&U

Hi,

Thanks for nice long update. I'm from across the Pond and we call them penthouses here too.

Thanks,

LG



Author's Response:

Hello Londongirl!!! Thankyou, Thankyou so much !! I was really wondering about that one !! Glad that you liked it! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: londongirl Signed
Date: October 14 2011

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 359]
Summary:

  

 

Lila James knows that her friendship with seventeen year old Chase Almeida is extremely inappropriate, but she still isn't prepared when his older brother Jack decides to tell her just how inappropriate it actually is-- inadvertently igniting a fire that had been burning quietly inside of them for years.

*****Lila's Thunder has been removed for editing, refining and if all goes according to plan, publishing! I couldn't have finished it without all my readers leaving their words and thoughts--even if I didn't always like them--so THANK YOU from the bottom of my heart. <3



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Suspense
Story Status: None
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 670
Read Count: 65031
Published: October 07 2011
Updated: September 09 2014


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nicely done, Voices. Now get writing I'm expecting chapter 2 soon, very soon. Like tomorrow soon. Seriously I can't wait to see how Lila and Jack's story pans out.

Reviewer: londongirl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: October 07 2011

Rated: All Ages
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[Reviews - 169]
Summary:

 

 

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Christmas is a time of giving and Henrietta Young is about to give the perfect gift to someone who doesn't deserve it.

 

 

The Gift  is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Inspirational
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: The Gift
Series: New Beginnings
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 3349
Read Count: 5888
Published: December 21 2011
Updated: December 21 2011


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very powerful first chapter. I was sucked in right away.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it.  Henry had to learn the hard way that money doesn't by happiness!

Reviewer: londongirl Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: December 21 2011

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 8]
Summary:


Adina Rush and Antioco Bianchi meet for the first time. Let the game of cat and mouse begin.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Extreme Language, Original Characters, Un-betaed
Challenges: News Year's Eve Challenge: The Resolutoin
Series: The Ties that Bind
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1725
Read Count: 4086
Published: January 01 2012
Updated: January 01 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Call Me

Let the games begin! Really enjoyed the first chapter. Is this a one shot wonder or will there be more?

Reviewer: londongirl Signed
Date: January 01 2012

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 32]
Summary:

 

Dr Vanessa Sharpe has just been offered the job of a lifetime, to work for a Japanese owned pharmaceutical company joining a successful research team headed up her former mentor.  This is her chance for a new start and to rebuild her confidence, she just needs to ignore her intense attraction to her sexy boss Takeshi and focus on her work that should be easy right?

 

Takeshi Yaguchi is the CEO of PharmaChem and heir to Yaguchi enterprises, he values Family and Honour and with his good looks, money and power he has dated many beautiful women but always ones that his family approves of and are considered acceptable for his position and has never deviated from this so why does he find himself drawn to Vanessa?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 2742
Read Count: 11149
Published: January 18 2012
Updated: January 18 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

The story has a lot of potential, but I have to agree with Artamiss Caine's comments. 

Really looking forward to reading chapter two!



Author's Response:

Thank you! all advice will be taken on board.

Reviewer: londongirl Signed starstarstarstar
Date: January 19 2012

Retired
Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 252]
Summary:

Matt was the love them and leave them type till he met Azalea. She turned the tables on him but not for the reasons he thinks. Will he forgive her when he learns the truth?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Erotica, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:No
Word count: 45561
Read Count: 65817
Published: August 25 2012
Updated: June 02 2014


Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15

Slightly confused as I thought I read this chapter before - last week. 

Good chapter - as someone else said Matt is blaming Azalea for everything and his mother seems to get a pass. Until they talk things out this relationship seems a bit doomed. :( 



Author's Response:

I am sorry for the confusion. I posted the update then took it down to be edited. 

Reviewer: londongirl Signed
Date: November 07 2013

Retired
Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 629]
Summary:

At some point, you'll have to eventually let your guard down.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 31
Completed:No
Word count: 192818
Read Count: 288927
Published: May 08 2013
Updated: October 03 2015


Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6

This story is so cute it hurts to read it - cute in the best possible way.

Valerie and Henry are gorgeous together and I'm rooting for Henry help Valerie conquer her demons once and for all.

Loving this little gem of a story!   

 

Reviewer: londongirl Signed
Date: June 30 2013

Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10

Henry & Valerie could possibly be the cutest couple ever!

Loved the chapter but it was way too short. :) 

Reviewer: londongirl Signed
Date: July 21 2013

Rated: Members ONLY: 17 and Older
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[Reviews - 6]
Summary:

3 Simple Rules


Never choose a model on a whim
Never work with the same model more than once
Never get high on your own supply

These are the Three Simple Rules that Hassan has followed for many years as a seasoned photographer. But when he meets her on the subaway, Hassan discovers that some rules are just meant to be broken.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Erotica
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: Can I Tell You My Fantasy?
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 4753
Read Count: 1772
Published: May 31 2013
Updated: May 31 2013


Title: Chapter 3: Never get high on your own supply

Short, sweet and slightly meloncholy. Leaving us wanting more - nice. Very nice!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: londongirl Signed
Date: June 01 2013

Rated: Most Ages
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[Reviews - 5]
Summary:

"You slept with Oliver Wood's fiancee. I'll need the money for your funeral".



Table of Contents
Categories: Books
Characters: Angelina Johnson
Classification: General, Off Cannon
Genre: Comedy , Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Un-betaed
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 995
Read Count: 3988
Published: July 15 2013
Updated: July 15 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Well...this is going to get interesting.

Two days before the wedding you say? Oooo there's gonna be some trouble ahead!

Great start! 

Reviewer: londongirl Signed
Date: July 15 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 353]
Summary:

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Paris finds herself on a deserted highway out of gas.  Little did she know that her life would be forever changed after that.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Lonely Highways, Love In Hard Times
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 558
Read Count: 82570
Published: July 17 2013
Updated: August 27 2013


Title: Chance Encounter

Wowser! That chapter was deep. So both Charles and Janie were hurt by people who were supposed to look out for them. No wonder they are so messed up.

Another great chapter!

 

Reviewer: londongirl Signed
Date: August 04 2013

Title: Chance Encounter

 

 

Reviewer: londongirl Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: August 04 2013

Rated: Teen or Above
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[Reviews - 14]
Summary:

Running from her past, Layla finds her future.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: None
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Un-betaed
Challenges: Lonely Highways
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 500
Read Count: 3142
Published: July 18 2013
Updated: July 18 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Lovely. Succinct. A 500 word gem. 



Author's Response:

Thanks Londongirl!

Reviewer: londongirl Signed
Date: July 18 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 5]
Summary:

I never should have driven through this area.

 

In response to the prompt:

Lonely Roads: Your car just quit on a dark stretch of road, not a passing car in sight. You debate on staying in your car and pray for help to roll by or take a chance to footing it. You decide on the later and after a few miles, you finally see another wandering soul. What happens next?

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Horror
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language
Challenges: Lonely Highways
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 499
Read Count: 733
Published: July 19 2013
Updated: July 19 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Don't know how I missed this! I'm intrigued. Shame you won't be continuing. :(

Reviewer: londongirl Signed
Date: November 27 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 35]
Summary: Ruby Gray is heading to a family reunion and this time, without her husband. She didn’t want to see the disapproval in her mother’s eyes or hear her sister talk about how good her marriage is but she knew that if she didn’t go, she’d never hear the end of it. Only the moment her car breaks down, Ruby realizes that she might’ve gotten more than she bargained for, especially when she runs into a very handsome stranger.

Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 4369
Read Count: 2770
Published: July 19 2013
Updated: July 19 2013


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

Did you us the prompt to help you start this story?

No matter 'cause this is a great start! Love Xander and I think he's just what Ruby needs.

I'm really looking forward to this! 

Reviewer: londongirl Signed
Date: July 19 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 46]
Summary:

BOOK 2

 

Mayte is a woman reborn. It's been 8 years since she left the torment of high school and she is truly feeling herself. But when a bully from her past life stumbles into her place of employment, all of sudden she feels like a bullied kid again; she wants revenge.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Erotica, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content
Series: Hollywood Gems
Chapters: 7
Completed:Yes
Word count: 15464
Read Count: 14747
Published: July 24 2013
Updated: August 18 2013


Title: Chapter 4: A Friendly Conversation

If the incident described in chapter 1 was a one off then okay. But if not then that then I have say Derek's realisation that he was an ass back in high school lacked a little something. I'm not sure what it is but that was less than satisfying.

 

 

 

 

 



Author's Response:

I agree with you. It's not good when the author isn't satisfied with it, you know it's not good. But I'm debating on rewriting that one or just rectifying in the next update. But thanks for reading. 

Reviewer: londongirl Signed
Date: July 28 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 125]
Summary:

I am currently NOT working on this story and don't know when I will be again. Writing this takes a toll on me and I have kinda been posting other things here. Give them a looksie. :]

 

Kensington's battered body ached from abuse, each blow recieved slowly tearing her apart. She was drowning in the hell that once used to be her home until a mysterious stranger comes along. Will he be the one restrore Kensington's faith in the world?

Heads up: The beginning (meaning the first few chapters)  of this story is a bit DARK. If you are of a faint heart than I fear this story is not going to be appealing to you. 


 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 10114
Read Count: 12991
Published: July 25 2013
Updated: May 29 2015


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

Kensington can't seem to get a break but there has to be a chink of light somewhere. The unrelenting brutality would wear down even the strongest of us.

While I'm not sure I agree with all of the points made by Cholyn, she does have a point re no one seeing anything. No matter how small the town/city or how upstanding the citizen someone must have noticed something. Whether they do anything is another matter.  

Everyone needs encouragement in order to exist. Where's Kensington getting hers from? Where has the formidable strength of character come from? How is she able to go on day after day in this sort of misery?!

A ray of light for the child please! It would be great if it where an interested adult or friend before her prince comes along to rescue her. But those are my thoughts and you are the author.

I'm really interested to see how you'll develop the story going forwards.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review! :]

As I wrote in the response to Cholyn, individuals get outstanding at hiding thinfs that they would rather not have anyone see. Just as adults in abusive relationships are capable of "hiding" the abuse, children and teens are as well. There are too many people in the world that simply don't care enough to help. Also, it is quite hard to help people who do not seek out help.

 

In regards to her encouragement, you'll see that in the next few chapters. :] 

 

Thank you tons for reading my story and taking the time to review it!

It means a hell of a lot to me. :D

Reviewer: londongirl Signed
Date: July 28 2013

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Powerful start! What it must be like to live in fear all the time. 

Wow. 

Reviewer: londongirl Signed
Date: July 25 2013

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 5]
Summary:

"I'll taste the devil's tears, drink from his soul, but I'll, never give up you."

 

-Angus and Julia Stone

He was a complete stranger who had a knack for taking what little walls people had built up around themselves, and tearing them down.

She was the victim of his demise, his misery, then soon enough, she fell victim to his love.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Family, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 4557
Read Count: 2682
Published: July 26 2013
Updated: July 26 2013


Title: Chapter 1: Misery Loves Company

Very nice start! 

You've left me wondering if the handsome stranger is a vampire/psychologist. And how he'll help our heroine escape her misery.

Gotta say the texts from her dad are heartbreaking.

Looking forward to more chapters.

 

 

Reviewer: londongirl Signed
Date: July 26 2013

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.