Penname: skriver [Contact]

Real name: Emma

Member Since: October 03 2011

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Enjoying reading. Currently reading  ANight to Remember By Eve Vaughn and Deceit, Regret, Confession by Kaleah.




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A Special Thank You to TokenBlackGirl for the AMAZING banner.

After being hired as the executive assistant to one of the youngest most influential and sexy corporate raiders of the 21st century Kenya Price comes face to face with her destiny.

 

Kenya is a mild mannered 22 year old thick sista with a beautiful soul and a caring spirit. Though her ultimate goal is to go back to university and earn a Degree in Childhood Education to become an Elementary school teacher, she takes the job working at the Roswell Corporation so she can save and finish off her schooling. Her motto is "Love can heal all wounds."

 

Grant Abraham Roswell III is a man that prides himself on a being a level headed, hardworking, no nonsense go getter. At the age of 24 he is a MIT graduate with more money than he could spend in a lifetime, he parties with rock stars, sleeps with models and feels that life cant get any better than that.His moto in life is "Who needs happiness when you have Money and Power?"

 

When Kenya enters his life and shows him there is more to life. Will he trust in Love or Will he let society take love away from him?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:No
Word count: 20252
Read Count: 76149
Published: May 29 2009
Updated: April 29 2013


Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Okay!! I like your story, because it's straight to the point.  I like how you portray Kenya as a down to earth woman, who know how to conduct herself in any situation. Oh I love Grant he is my kinda of man.  He knows what he want and he has the mean to get.  I wish is was that easy to adopt, but if you have money it is. Please keep writing more, I like your style...



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review. Im glad you enjoyed the chapter. Hope you enjoy the new update sorry for the long wait.

Reviewer: skriver Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 08 2011

Rated: 17 and older
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Danielle Roberts affectionately known as Dani to everyone, has what everyone else seems to want, money, power and respect.  But she doesn't have the one thing that she wants, love.Chad Collins is everybody's All-American. He's got the career, the money and the chicks throwing themselves at him, but he doesn't have the one he wants, Dani.


They've both signed the contract with "the clause".  Will they be able to overcome it and find the true love they've both been waiting on?


Another Installment of Kerrington & Associates


All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: Kerrington & Associates
Chapters: 25
Completed:Yes
Word count: 43047
Read Count: 76819
Published: March 17 2010
Updated: April 02 2012


Title: Chapter 23: Murder for Hire

Man Chad coming early nearly foil the plan.  Heather is totally gone to crazyland, here is hoping she stay lock up forever.  Dani what a brave soul she is. This is a made for TV thriller. I sure would watch it. Keep it coming, or is it more please lol.



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I try to write like its gonna be on tv...

 

Reviewer: skriver Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 30 2011

Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Oh my, oh my, I'm so into this story. It's a murder by hire thriller, implied by a mad woman scorned.  I just can't wait to read how you handle Snake interaction with Dani about Heather plan to have her kill and the icing on the cake what will Chad and Dani do with such info.  Oh the suspense is killing me, so please hurry up with the next chapter...serious next chapter please.



Author's Response:

I am typing as I week speak...

Reviewer: skriver Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 29 2011

Title: Chapter 24: Moving On...

Wow!!! Dani sure put Kerrington in his place. And Chad, well what can one say about this man "Let me have him" lol.  You know when I read these stories on this site and others, I do wonder if these type of men really exist for real or only in fantasy land, but whatever they are a joy to read, just like this one.  So please keep the chapters coming, you are doing fantastically.



Author's Response:

I think we all want these men, which is why they are perfect on paper. I really appreciate you sticking it out with me and reading till the end.

Reviewer: skriver Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 02 2011

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 415]
Summary:

 

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When the lines are drawn, will you risk your life to cross them for love?

In the Summer of 1988, tragedy hits home for Charlene Jacobson and her father when her little brother is killed playing a game of basketball in their Detroit housing projects.  She soon finds herself living in the small rural town of Millersville, Georgia, with her estranged grandmother. Millersville is a place where time stands still and the racial divide is as prevalent as the 1950s.  Secrets, lies, and betrayal lurk in every corner. Yet, through it all she finds solace in the arms of Ryan Quinn, a white senior track star and the son of the town Sherriff.  

Will their love cross the finish line?  

EDIT:  Crossing the Finish line has been removed from this site and a revised version with added new content has been published on Amazon Kindle Vella (as of November 2022) under the penname, Shelly B Williams. To those of you who have left reviews, added me to your Favorite Authors and Story Alerts, and helped to make CTFL one of the Top Ten Most Favorited Stories on Valent Chamber, I trully appreciate all the support you have shown me over the years. I hope you will continue to support me as I begin the next phase of my journey as a published author. I couldn't  have done this without you. 

Much Love!

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: Completed
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Homosexuality, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Challenges: Deep, dark, and mysterious
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 5758
Read Count: 214754
Published: November 07 2010
Updated: January 09 2014


Title: Crossing the Finish Line

This is my first time reading this story and it's really a good read and I enjoy it.  Now as to whether she should tell Ryan about his Dad illicit affair. the answer is not until she has all the facts that it is what she think it is and even so, if it was her would she want someone to tell her, it's a win lose dilemma. Can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: skriver Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 04 2011

Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

A lot of things are happening in Kayla’s life. Her career is taking off like a rocket. She just released her third album, she doing some modeling, and some acting. She also written a memoir about her life, her family and friends, her singing, seeing her mom again, her career starting, her past relationship, and getting her relationship back with her mom. She has everything she has ever wanted in her career, but something was missing in her life and it was love. She has dated a few guys for the past few years, but she wasn’t attractive to them at all. Until she meets the perfect guy who would change her life, completely. He also taught her how to love again.



Table of Contents
Categories: Movies
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 5059
Read Count: 3163
Published: March 28 2011
Updated: May 16 2013


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Night to remember

I think I'm going to be feeling this story. Why? Because it's Brandy and Maks in characters of Kayla Harria and Brandon Burrell. So please no writers block in this story.  Your characters will have so many script and unscript scenarios for you to write from. Just look into the lives of who you choose to be your main characters cast pictures, there is so much going on there, also the movies in which you base this story on.  This story development is endless, you have so much to choose from, especially from your main characters cast pictures. They are in the A list celebs bracket. Check out YouTube.  Anyway have fun writing and update soon.

Reviewer: skriver Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 17 2011

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 How Kayla and Brandon first met

Hey!!! It's good to have you back.  Writers block its a pain but it's good back and checkout your main cast pictures lives and refocus.  I know at the moment that Brandy (Kayla) life looke like it's in the Twilight Zone, what with her getting engage to a man that looks gay and she has no chemistry with and I am sure is her paid escort. Yeah I know, I am the WTH zone.  Anyway go to YouTube and watch DWTS season 11 (Brandy and Maks) you will be inspires. Great chapter btw.



Author's Response:

I would watch the video, but my brain is all dried out. Your words help. Tell me your ideas.

Reviewer: skriver Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: May 16 2013

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You have had life mapped out at a young age. Get into a performance arts college. Own your own dance studio and stay away from boys.... But what happens when you meet the love of your life?  Then come to find out he has a girlfriend? But, he has eyes for only you...

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 30
Completed:No
Word count: 181242
Read Count: 80217
Published: April 05 2011
Updated: December 24 2017


Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 You And Me And All Other People

I think its time you let Jalena and Justin get together for real.  This back and fore is getting boring to read.  I mean why is it so hard for Jalena to tell Justin what she heard Stacey plans are for him, and I'm sure Justin is not so dumb to not know he is being use by her. But then again this High School Drama lol.



Author's Response:

Ouch! Sorry to bore you. Yes High School full of drama. Thanks for reviweing :)

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Date: June 02 2012

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Sara Richards lives in Ōsaka, Japan. She becomes embroiled in the drama and comedy of clashing cultures, traditional philosophies and modern ideas as she is reunited with the past. She struggles to navigate the tempestuous waters where East meets West and a love lost but not forgotten that may never be regained, while keeping her eye on the one point in the sky that can lead her the peace of dry land. Her Bright Ōsaka Star.

 

Fabulous Banner by Music!!!

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Drabbles
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Spring Baby-Fic Challenge
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:No
Word count: 72940
Read Count: 168025
Published: April 05 2011
Updated: June 27 2012


Title: Chapter 11: Jyuu (10)

This story is a great read. Not to heavy and funny in places.  I like the Darren and Percy interaction, it makes me laugh. I like Sara strong character. I hope you don't make her weak over Kamir, because he seem like a player who is only out to have fun. And she need to be mindful he is from a country where families like his arrange marriage. So keep writing more.



Author's Response:

I think you may be the first person to mention India's rranged marriage situation. Good point. I'm glad you like it. I think Sara may have her days, but weak she is not. Thanks!

Reviewer: skriver Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 21 2011

Title: Chapter 12: Jyuu ichi (11)

Miss you!! Glad you are back, Yeah I know It hasn't been that long, but It a good story to read and your writing style is captivating. I hope Sara think deeply on the questions her neighbour ask Kamir. I know she had not had 'ANY' for a long time, but she need to think that Kamir is just passing through and she can't afford to get carried away. So next chapter please.



Author's Response:

Shinohara was being sneaking! But he was on the mark. :)

Reviewer: skriver Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 11 2011

Rated: Mature Content
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Summary:

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Having chosen modeling over ministry, Jeremy Ferguson had often felt his father's scorn and disapproval.  Now he was coming home to visit and bringing the love of his life, Aura Vanderleigh who happens to be black.  Growing up in South Carolina, Jeremy knows what his father's reaction will be even if he is a minister!

 

The Preacher's Son is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2009 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Racism
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 2681
Read Count: 128935
Published: July 31 2011
Updated: June 02 2014


Title: Chapter 2: Update on The Preacher's Son!

Hej Congrat!!! You are a great storyteller, so I can't wait to read your book.  Thank for being so giving God bless you alway.



Author's Response:

Thank you for all your support!

Reviewer: skriver Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 05 2013

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 66]
Summary:

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Shy loner white nerd developes caring and complex relationship with popular black girl at school.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Rape, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 13
Completed:No
Word count: 40411
Read Count: 25023
Published: August 02 2011
Updated: April 02 2017


Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

This is a great story to read.  Your writing style is real and straight to the point.  I like the way you make your characters accountable for their actions.  So keep it real as you are now and next chapter please.



Author's Response: Thank you so much! That really means a lot. Stay tuned for more.

Reviewer: skriver Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 30 2012

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[Reviews - 101]
Summary:

Leslie West is a quiet beautiful southern belle who just moved up to New York, Blake Caldron is a fashion guru who can't seem to keep his eyes off of a new church attendee. Due to certain circumstances he needs to watch from a far... But for how long?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Drugs/Drug Use, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Rape, Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 18
Completed:No
Word count: 28720
Read Count: 33058
Published: August 14 2011
Updated: December 31 2013


Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14- Oh Wow

Marcello is so jealous, he will say anything to turn her against Blake. And anyway when will Blake have time to kill Kim, he was not even angry with, just sad she lost the baby.  His mind was always on Leslie. I do have a feeling it was Marcello kill her over the baby.  After all he is mafia.  I just hope Leslie stay don't do anything stupid, like believe Marcello.

Reviewer: skriver Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 23 2011

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Tyler could count on one hand the number of attempted, but failed relationships that he had; had. It was getting to the point that he just was ready to give up on finding love or the right person he could give his entire self to. Most of the women he had a relationship with didn't last long not because they didn't want it, they just couldn't handle his faults or flaws. Tyler Hollis had a secret an extremely large secret that over the years, he had learned how to control to an extent, but at some point in the relationship, it would become the topic of conversation and downhill the relationships would go. He was looking for that one special woman that wouldn't mind them; he wasn't sure if she was the one, but the way he was feeling about her he wanted to make her the one. It wasn't very many women he had wanted in his thirty-eight years, but her he felt he couldn't live without.

♥ ஒ Love ஒ ♥...

Kayla had only had two real relationships in her life, okay let's be honest one and she wasn't even sure that was the real thing. It had been over seven years ago. She had always focused on her career, she was what they called a workaholic, her best friends India and Traci would tell her she was sexually deprived, that she needed to started living before she woke up one morning and life had passed her bye. However, never in her right mind did she think she would be in a predicament like this, it was totally out of her character to let something like this happen, and to let it happen like this. It was overwhelming more like surreal an impulsive act, or so she thought. Could it have been a calculating move on his part or was it just something that happened to happen. But if they both were completely honest with themselves it had been building ever since that faithful snowy morning.

♥ ஒ Love ஒ ♥...

Disclaimer: There is no Copyright Infringement intended. The names and characters in this story are of my own creation, so any similarities to any person or person's in this story dead or alive fictional or non-fictional is purely coincidental. Any and all recognizable characters involved in the images are solely owned and the property of their respective owners or by an unknown developer THAT IS NOT ME!! I do not own it/them and will not make money on them. The author of this story is in no way associated with the franchise/franchises of any creators, producer, owner or any media that may be used along with this story.

© Kaleah, 2011.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Erotica, Family, Fantasy, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female, Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 47
Completed:Yes
Word count: 218680
Read Count: 114535
Published: October 03 2011
Updated: January 01 2013


Title: Chapter 2: A Chance Meeting with you

A good start to this story. I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: skriver Signed starstarstarstar
Date: October 03 2011

Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

Dijnae Anderson is a full-figured high school junior. She's dealing with crazy best friends, a protective brother, her insecurities, and her attraction to the Co-Captain of the Football team. No one said high school was easy and she's definitely being put to the test.


Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Extreme Language
Series: None
Chapters: 9
Completed:No
Word count: 15199
Read Count: 15494
Published: October 16 2011
Updated: February 02 2012


Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Dijnae is like some of the girls I used to know in school.  They are nice but weak, so people walk all over them, which is sad. I hope you will give her more confident to stand up for herself and stop being a tragic. 
So please continue to write more.

Reviewer: skriver Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 10 2011

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 245]
Summary:

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Maximillian Peterson was a man who appeared to have everything...looks, money and good health.  There was just one little problem...he was lacking where he thought it mattered most.  Selma Bloomfield was a widow who hadn't had sex in five years. She and Maxie had hit it off, but he was hesitant in taking their relationship to consummation.  How would Selma take it when she discovers Maxie's "little" secret?

A Perfect Fit is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations
Series: None
Chapters: 12
Completed:Yes
Word count: 57110
Read Count: 39385
Published: November 10 2011
Updated: April 20 2012


Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6

Wow!!! Russell is jealous, because he was a coward back in the day, when he could have had what Maxie has now. Ijust hope he leave Selma alone and don't do anything stupid.  I think the man needs help bad.



Author's Response:

Russ is jealous of Maxie.  He's not stupid though, and he won't make a move on his brother's woman.  Russ is an analytical type of guy.  Everything is black and white and moving on your brother's woman as well as cheating is a big no no in his book.  More is coming soon.

Reviewer: skriver Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 16 2011

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[Reviews - 131]
Summary:

 

 

Arranged Marriage- a marriage arranged by someone other than the couple getting wedded, curtailing or avoiding the process of courtship.

It's 2009 and Thea Malebranche could have sworn the archaic practice didn't occur here in America. But Apparently, she was mistaken. 

Definition Courtesy of Wikipedia && Banner Courtesy of the lovely Minx

 

 

 

 

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 6105
Read Count: 9625
Published: November 14 2011
Updated: May 17 2012


Title: Chapter 1: The Arrangement

This could be very interested, I would loved to read more, but there is one thing I have to ask, why does she she hate him so much? What has he done to her for her or haven't done to her for her to have such hate? I can't wait for this mystery to be unfold.

Reviewer: skriver Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 14 2011

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Eve and A.J. Winters had a life most people dreamed of and a love only a handful ever experienced. But one seeming mistake will test everything they hold dear. Can love truly survive on Broken Vows?

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All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are all MINE. I am is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Drugs/Drug Use, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 7
Completed:No
Word count: 10759
Read Count: 9638
Published: November 22 2011
Updated: February 23 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1:It all came crashing down

What a begining.  Eve excitment turn to shock, cheating husband. I need to read more.  Update soon.

Reviewer: skriver Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 22 2011

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 112]
Summary:

Duke and Duchess of York have produced three male heirs and their beloved Princess Diana Marie Claire. Diana isn't a normal child and has trouble living in the spotlight hiding a crucial secret... How will the love of her life react when he unfolds the secret note inside her heart.

 

"Love me; That's all I ask of you"

 

story theme song: All I ask of you- Phantom of the Opera



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Family, Inspirational, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Spritualism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: Royally Yours
Chapters: 28
Completed:Yes
Word count: 38043
Read Count: 32926
Published: November 23 2011
Updated: October 07 2013


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3- University

Thanks for explaining the use of the pictures and the school years. I enjoy reading the story, so keep it going.

Reviewer: skriver Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 29 2011

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- Her Diagnosis

A bit of a sad begining. Would there be any pictures of the children, hope so. More of the same please.



Author's Response:

I'm trying to find triplets, two boys and a girl lol. As you can imagine it is quite hard- but once I find the fit. Hopefully before Diana gets older I will post them :)

Reviewer: skriver Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 23 2011

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2- Daddy's Princess

Thank for the pictures. although when I saw the first two pictures , I thought I click on the wrong story, because the pictures were of white babies, then I saw the last two and thought...Hmm strange combination.  So why different colour babies pictures? And also how old are the children now? I'm a bit confuse about their age, because Alex suppose to be the youngest and yet they are all having their first day at school.  This chapter was very confusing to read, because there are no timeline for us to follow, I mean from babies to first day at school in one sentence lol. I hope next chapter which is 12 years later, will help me understand what I miss in chapter 2.  I know, enough of that, just like this story that's all.



Author's Response:

sorry for the confusion but... to be honest their baby years would have been boring lol. Enjoy Diana's college years.

Reviewer: skriver Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 24 2011

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Summary:

  Rosco Witherspoon is an intelligent young lady. In the 1950s South, there are virtually no opprotunities for her considering that she is an African American. By the grace of God, a family will risk everything they have to give her everything she deserves so that she can get a fitting High School education. Following the death of her mother, her three older sisters clench  their teeth as they decide to send their youngest off to be cared for by people they've never had a reason to trust because of their skin.

 

     She'll cause the small town to go into an uproar upon her arrival. How long can she get by with passing before she is outed?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Family, Friendship, Historical, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 21
Completed:No
Word count: 60746
Read Count: 24194
Published: November 23 2011
Updated: December 15 2013


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1

I must say I was quite apprehensive about reading this story, the reason for this is that I don't know or understand the psychology of such behaviour. I figure it has to be all sort of reasoning and circumstances to trigger that cause and effect.  But I did watch a movie awhile back called 'Imitation of Life' I think where such a storyline happen, the ending was very sad indeed.  I also read an interracial book called 'A twist of Fate' by Beverly Clark, where a similar storyline take place, but not with main characters but with the man's mother.  She was of black parentage, but look white and married white and was afraid to have children in case their skins was dark...You guys need to read the book, it's a good read.  But even knowing these happened I am still at lost as to why.  So hopefully reading this story will enlightening me some more. So please continue writing.

Reviewer: skriver Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: November 24 2011

Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

 

 

 

His greatest gift....

 

He sits on the floor blanketed by dust, chipped paint and years of abandonment and waits. He hasn't to wait too long and soon Beethoven's Appassionata fills the air, the quiet and ominous arpeggios of the first movement, full of longing echoes through his very bones.

There is nothing else in this moment but the beauty of the melody cosseting him into a world unlike any he's ever known. The transition is gradual. Colors creep in from the edges of his vision turning his monochrome prison into a realm of diluted colors. The strains of piano chords ascend and descend skimming effortlessly over complex intervals with dexterity.

It is wondrous. Tints of violets, reds and greens wash over the gray coolness of his vision, giving him the ability to see color. Three months now she's been able to do this. Gift Cyvian with the impossible.

 

Will be his ultimate downfall...

In the ongoing war between Bloodletters and Werekins, demon mercenary Cyvian's allegiance is no one but himself. Having struck a deal with the Bloodletter king to keep the demons from his territory in exchange for temporary solace in his city, he does exactly that. But when that contract is broken, threatening the life of the human female he has vowed to protect, nothing and no one will stop him from keeping her safe.

 

(The amazing picture of my hero doesn't belong to me, but from a great artist on Deviantart!)



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: Supernatural
Genre: Action-Adventure , Fantasy, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 3
Completed:No
Word count: 6650
Read Count: 4443
Published: November 30 2011
Updated: October 19 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow!!! Human female and demon, hmmm, you got me curious, so here to the next chapters.

Reviewer: skriver Signed starstarstarstar
Date: November 30 2011

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 61]
Summary:

[Updating Summary]



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 8
Completed:No
Word count: 15877
Read Count: 12322
Published: December 04 2011
Updated: August 02 2015


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 2

I'm looking forward to reading more of this story. Now with the cast pictures up, I couldn't help laughing who you pick to be Malcolm the magic man, that was low man. So where is the pic for Fallon? She sound cute. From what I just read this story is going to be intense, so can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Yeah I couldn't resist picking Brad Pitt to play Malcolm. He's the guy you love to hate and hate to love...sorta lol

I was trying to find a pic of Fallon, but I don't know who could her. Hopefully I'll find a pic for her soon.

Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: skriver Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 12 2011

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 265]
Summary:

Welcome to the city of Baltimore, MD and into the life of Devyn McKnight. Jewelry designer and entrepreneur, Devyn McKnight, thought she was secure in the shell she built around her life, made of family, friends and her jewelry business but an unexpected encounter challenges all that she is and all that she believes she wants to be.  

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Strong Sexual Content
Series: Journey
Chapters: 32
Completed:Yes
Word count: 91963
Read Count: 104078
Published: December 11 2011
Updated: January 07 2014


Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 2

Why did she not tell him the truth. Erin was a stranger to her. Now she bring trouble on herself, because he is not going to give up until he knows the truth.  So she should not be angry at him but at herself for being stupid. More please.

Reviewer: skriver Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: December 11 2011

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