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If you don’t stick to your values when they’re being tested, they’re not values: they’re hobbies.


~Jon Stewart




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Rated: Mature Content
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Summary:

All is fair in love and war?

That's the way the story goes until Nita Floyd's promotion is handed to the son of her firm's managing partner. Fifteen years on the job, two failed marriages, and a son and daughter who hate her more than life itself, what's Nita's next move. How far will she go to right the wrong especially when her rival re-acquaints her with a little thing called fun.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Family, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Fluff, Original Characters, Racism, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 11
Completed:No
Word count: 11731
Read Count: 28334
Published: December 12 2011
Updated: March 05 2012


Title: Chapter 10: My Own Worst Enemy

Please tell me that Nash is not Mr Perfect and Nita is not Miss Perfect. PLEASSSSSE! I'll feel so bad for Russ if true. Poor Russ. He must really like Nita to take another hit to the gut.

I so hopen you continue to feel inspired. I really like this story.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: February 29 2012

Title: Love and War

Scribe! Chica! Whut Happen?!?! I enjoy this one even though Nita is making me want to smack her right now. I'm here for the long haul and hate to think that you might not continue this one. Just because some of us might not be getting Nita right now doesn't mean she isn't a very interesting and intriguing character. I say, let the muse speak. We'll get it soon enough. Some of us might not get it at all, but hey, so what. Be true to the Nita in your head. Continue, please. I hope nothing I've said has made you come to this point.  I think you're very talented and if I didn't like reading about Nita, I wouldn't. And we all come to a story with our own shadings and experiences. So, let it flow, Chica.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 03 2012

Title: Chapter 11: Awkward Indiscretions...

oh boy. this just got real complicated for Russ and Nash.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 07 2012

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Summary:

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Sometimes when it comes to family and their issues, a lie is more acceptable than reality.

 

Acceptable Lies is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2011 BRAnderson



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: Muse went on vacation, no idea when it will be back
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Series: None
Chapters: 19
Completed:Yes
Word count: 93404
Read Count: 92172
Published: December 23 2011
Updated: January 19 2013


Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9 Digging in Deeper

Sydney. I don't know what to say about this chick. Yeah, she loves Trevon, but evidently not enough. And he deserves someone who does. So, yeah, I'm glad he bounced. There's nothing he can do, it's up to her to actually grow a spine and face her father. If she can't do that, then Trevon is better off. How can she think that Trevon would be OK with the termination of their baby? And the statement that she was going to do it without him even knowing about the baby is just low. Just because he wouldn't know doesn't mean it didn't happen. Trevon really needs to re-think whether he knows who this person is. She really pisses me off.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 15 2012

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6 Warning

I must admit that I thought very little of Sugar in the beginning. But damn if she didn't deliver. I hope she continues to thwart Albert at every turn. Ole girl didn't just fall off the turnip truck. And yes, she might be ghetto fabulous, but that don't mean she's not a clever cookie.

Gabe really has a few issues. When he finds out what his father is up to, he's going to lose it. And that sister of his is just creepy.

 

Really enjoying this one, Chica.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 23 2012

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8 Hypocrisy

How many lies. How many liars. How many will be caught. Sydney resorts to lying first. And now will have to tell more to cover the initial lie. She'll eventually get caught up in her own web. And what will happen when the potential baby daddy finds out?

 

No man has a good enough memory to make a successful liar.  ~Abraham Lincoln

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Date: February 29 2012

Rated: Mature Content
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[Reviews - 30]
Summary:

 

Adina Rush and Ant Bianchi are back...

 

There's a complication...

 

How far will Ant go to win the girl?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Dark Fic, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed
Series: The Ties that Bind
Chapters: 4
Completed:Yes
Word count: 5354
Read Count: 14028
Published: January 03 2012
Updated: February 19 2012


Title: Chapter 3: The Makings of You

wow. enjoying this.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: February 18 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

 

We Shall Overcome Someday

by Brenda 1257

Henry McDermont wants to establish a relationship with his former girlfriend and his daughter, but each has baggage from their past that is influencing their decisions today.  Each family has racial issues that they need to deal with.  Can Henry and Vanessa overcome their past in order to make a new future?

We Shall Overcome Someday is an original work of fiction. Please do not copy or post this story to any other websites. Copyright 2012 BRAnderson

 

 

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Racism
Series: New Beginnings
Chapters: 3
Completed:Yes
Word count: 16498
Read Count: 6394
Published: January 06 2012
Updated: January 16 2012


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Vanessa's Dilemma

It's interesting that in the beginning one could come down hard on Henry for how he treated Vanessa. But I've learned with your stories that things are not always as they seem. Your characters are given so many layers and you paint a full picture of who those characters are and that takes time. So, while the initial reaction may be, how could he do that? With each installment you get a better idea of the circumstances and human flaws an frailities involved. I love that about your storytelling.

On a more humorus note, when I'm reading about the grandmother and Uncle, I get a Madea and that brother of hers picture. I don't know why that popped into my head. Can't wait to see the Uncle after all these years and his wrong-headed notions. Henry is no longer that naive little kid that he was. I'm thinking he'll be able to hold his own.



Author's Response:

Thank you BellaChica:  I do that because there is always a reason why people are the way they are.  Every character I write will not always be redeemable, because all people cannot recover and move on from their pain, so they continue to hurt others.  As a minister I've learned that.

For example, Henry's parents are still the same even though the child they wanted to get rid of ended up saving their only child's life.  They pushed that fact out of their minds.  Howvever, they are going to come face to face with Henrietta and that will be interesting.

I guess it's the minister in me coming out.l All babies are born innocent.  Negative behavior is learned and pain that is inflicted is repeated.  I love redemption.  It is always somewhere hidden in my stories.  LOL  Howver, as I said, everyone cannot be redeemed, I know that.

LOL at Madea.  I hadn't thought about that, but now I can't get those two out of my mind.  If it looks like Madea and her brother in the next installment, it's your fault.  LOL 

Thank you for reviewing.  We all are a work in progress and only God's grace can help us to move closer to what our LORD really wants us to become.

 

Brenda

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: January 08 2012

Rated: Mature Content
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Summary:

 

Dr Vanessa Sharpe has just been offered the job of a lifetime, to work for a Japanese owned pharmaceutical company joining a successful research team headed up her former mentor.  This is her chance for a new start and to rebuild her confidence, she just needs to ignore her intense attraction to her sexy boss Takeshi and focus on her work that should be easy right?

 

Takeshi Yaguchi is the CEO of PharmaChem and heir to Yaguchi enterprises, he values Family and Honour and with his good looks, money and power he has dated many beautiful women but always ones that his family approves of and are considered acceptable for his position and has never deviated from this so why does he find himself drawn to Vanessa?



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Character Death, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:No
Word count: 2742
Read Count: 10153
Published: January 18 2012
Updated: January 18 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh, I'm really going to enjoy this one.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: January 20 2012

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Summary:

Love does not come with blueprints. There will be pain, violence, humor, vindictiveness, lust, desire, and jealousy before you even get to the kiss.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Taking a short break from this story
Pairings: Original
Warnings: Adult Situations, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Work in Progress
Series: None
Chapters: 5
Completed:No
Word count: 19737
Read Count: 16629
Published: February 10 2012
Updated: November 26 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

They're surrounded by folks that mean them no good. But I'm thinking Morgan can handle it.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: February 11 2012

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

"Tell me Miss Clare, who is the alpha male?

*raises hand excitedly in the air* I can answer that. :0

Nelson may be a sneaky SOB, but Morgan will bury his ass. Look at Morgan planning how he's going to keep Kennedy around. I like this man.

His father is all kinds of twisted. To be jealous of your own son. If they had not had Morgan, something else would've set him off. He'd probably start harping on any friends that Eva had. Glad she no longer with that pyscho. But I'm a little scared for Edward. But then again, considering his background, he probably already knows EVERYTHING about Martin.

I'm thoroughly enjoying this story.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: February 18 2012

Rated: 17 and older
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[Reviews - 5]
Summary:


*Repost*


Hell hath no fury like a woman scorned...


Unless you count the crazy co-worker who forgot to take her meds.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Psychological, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, BDSM, Dubcon, Original Characters, Sexual Content
Challenges: Just Desserts
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1960
Read Count: 2218
Published: February 14 2012
Updated: February 14 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Pleasure in Your Pain

Glad you re-posted this one. Just as good the second time around.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: February 18 2012

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Summary:

Lieutenant Brady Sloane was a good man, but always seemed to finish last with women, until now.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Action-Adventure , Drama, Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Challenges: Love Is Blind
Series: None
Chapters: 4
Completed:No
Word count: 16076
Read Count: 24006
Published: March 03 2012
Updated: May 06 2016


Title: Chapter 2: Two

Mom's genes are working REAL fast. I'm surprised that Mom didn't ask if Pen was on BC. But then again, Mom probably wants grandbabies, STAT.

I like Brady. I like Pen. But there are so many who want to conspire against them. However, Brady has a family in his team that has his back COMPLETELY.

I'm enjoying this tale immensely. Well done, Chica.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 04 2016

Title: Chapter 1: One

brillant.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 03 2012

Title: Chapter 3: Three

Harvey is delusional. You're a FRIEND, you idiot. And not a real one at that. He is making ginormous mistake underestimating Brady. What a dope.

Glad Brady is clear about what he wants with Pen.

Enjoying this story.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: April 04 2016

Rated: 17 and older
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Summary:

 

 

 

 

Sometimes there's more to a person than meets the eye...



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: None
Story Status: None
Pairings: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Love Is Blind
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 4518
Read Count: 1763
Published: March 04 2012
Updated: March 04 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

well done, Chica.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 04 2012

Rated: Most Ages
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Summary:

 

 

*Response to the Love is Blind challenge*

 

I've been living so long with my pictures of you...



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Friendship, Romance
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Original Characters
Challenges: Love Is Blind
Series: None
Chapters: 1
Completed:Yes
Word count: 1176
Read Count: 3410
Published: March 04 2012
Updated: March 04 2012


Title: Chapter 1: Pictures of You...

beautiful.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 04 2012

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Summary:

He was the last person that she thought would want to help her.



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: General
Genre: Drama, Romance, Suspense
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Adult Situations, Extreme Language, Graphic Violence, Original Characters, Sexual Content , Un-betaed , Work in Progress
Series: The only thing that matters
Chapters: 10
Completed:No
Word count: 54189
Read Count: 107312
Published: March 04 2012
Updated: March 04 2016


Title: Chapter 4: {Four} When he has your scent

I hate Parker with a passion. And Brad, just no. He's an idiot. Trace is all kinds of Alpha. yum.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: April 13 2012

Title: Chapter 1: {One} Between a Rat and a Wolf

AntiV,  that opening sentence just grabs you. I had to read it multiple times. This is so full of tasty goodness that I can not wait to read more. Trace is right, Orange Suit is an asshole. I'd take the Wolf anyday. I bet we haven't seen the last of Orangey. I'm glad Trace beat that ass. Ole man Parker must be damn rich. Someone needs to beat his butt. Does Lauren have any family? She and Trace in close quarters will be very interesting. More please, Chica. Very nicely done.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 04 2012

Title: Chapter 2: {Two} There are things we have to do

I really like the Wolf. He is succinct and to the point. Everytime I read about him and how he looks at Lauren, I picture a wolf. Lauren has no clue what she's in for. Looking forward to finding out more about who Trace is.

And youngblood is asking for an ass whupping, if and when he steps to Lauren. Loved that the old man told him he's tell his family that he went down swinging. Made me laugh.

Waiting for the next chapter. You're doing a fine job with this tale.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 07 2012

Title: Chapter 5: {Five} In the arms of the Concrete Dog

Wonderfully written. And damn, Trace, made me speechless. Lauren will need to kepp up her strength. And I don't care how many pills she takes, there will be little Traces running around soon enough. :)

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: May 28 2012

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Summary:

*Response to the Take Me Please Challenge*

Five miles outside of hell and a few meters from the devil's doorstep, Mari finds her favorite kind of challenge, a pretty boy with a big stick.

 



Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: Original Character(s)
Classification: General
Genre: Comedy , Erotica
Story Status: None
Pairings: Male/Female
Warnings: Adult Situations, Crackfic, Extreme Language, Original Characters, Racism, Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: Take Me Please!
Series: Southern Gents
Chapters: 6
Completed:Yes
Word count: 9399
Read Count: 19546
Published: March 07 2012
Updated: March 08 2012


Title: Chapter 2: 1. Bear

I'm a daughter of the Deep South, so whatever language you use, I've heard. Ahh, the fond memories *smirk*

I can tell I'm going to like this one. Waiting.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 07 2012

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Table of Contents
Categories: Original Fiction
Characters: None
Classification: None
Genre: Romance
Story Status: Active
Pairings: None
Warnings: Strong Sexual Content
Challenges: Take Me Please!
Series: None
Chapters: 20
Completed:Yes
Word count: 99741
Read Count: 96996
Published: March 08 2012
Updated: January 31 2013


Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Confessions and Repercussions

Jared may become a real man after all. And with Lucinda by his side, he has a real chance.

Their father is a real gem.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 17 2012

Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Moment of Truth

Charlie, Charlie, Charlie. He is so sprung.

And Charles, Sr., destined to do what he tried to trick his boys into. Truly, just desserts.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: March 25 2012

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 A Man Coming into His Own

umm yeah, story interruptus. But looking forward to the Education of Charlie.

Charlie took some of Jared's words to heart. Jared had a very interesting perspective regarding their growing up years. It always fascinates me how two people can experience the same events and come away with different perceptions of what happened. Reality is subjective.

But there is no doubt that Charles, Sr is a bastid. Devoid of any human decency whatsoever. Makes me wonder why the hell Valerie hasn't divorced his no account butt.

So, hope you update soon, Chica.

Reviewer: BellaChica Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: March 20 2012

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